| Reviews for Savages |
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Spellweaver10 chapter 3 . 9/17/2016 Amazing plot andvwriting so far. While I can't write a more thorough review from my phone I have to say that as a fallout player and partialy a DB fan I found this really enjoyable. |
Maiika chapter 4 . 9/15/2016 Thank you for writing a post-apocalyptic A/U! I've been wanting to read a new one so badly, and now that I've seen this, I'm hooked. You write really well, and the action in this last chapter was really tense and exciting. Very well executed. The only thing I have to ask of you is please don't dumb down Goku too much. So many B/V fics are guilty of making him too 'goofy'. He needs to be in character just as much as Vegeta and Bulma. I'm not saying you've done that, but if it happened later on, that would ruin this great story for me. Keep up the great work. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
Guest chapter 4 . 9/14/2016 So happy you updated! Absolutely love this story as it's so imaginative and amazingly written. Understand about real life but please contribute to write as much as possible! Thanks for sharing your work! |
ko-tok chapter 4 . 9/14/2016 Great! |
Guest chapter 4 . 9/14/2016 I really love this story because the idea is unique and it's well written. I'm glad you updated and I hope that you keep updating. I look forward to reading more of this. |
dbz chapter 4 . 9/14/2016 was waiting for update for long time and it was worth it great chapter , hope next will b soon |
Guest chapter 4 . 9/14/2016 So excited to see a new chapter! It was brilliant; love the interactions between the characters and the action. Great job |
khalidalkhansa chapter 3 . 4/3/2016 I like how AU your piece is. Looking forward to the next update. |
anlmoon chapter 3 . 3/20/2016 Very interesting and good chapters please continue |
Luna chapter 3 . 3/1/2016 I'm loving this story! Please continue updated its worth the reading! |
Luna chapter 1 . 3/1/2016 Love post apocalyptic stories. Great story! |
fireballjunior2 chapter 3 . 2/15/2016 I am SUPER excited about this story. I've been lurking b/v fanfics a for a while now, and after a while it becomes apparent that new ideas are all drying up and each new story is the same concept with a slightly different angle. That's not a bad thing, of course, it just gets redundant.. THIS though, this is just so fresh and written SO well. This is the first story in a LONG time that I'm excited for, and have NO idea what angle it's going to play. I am truly excited to see where you go with this! Please keep up the good work, I can't wait for a new chapter! |
dbz chapter 3 . 2/13/2016 interesting start . waiting for update |
Jessica chapter 3 . 2/13/2016 Very interesting plot! I bet it won't take long before Vegeta realizes that Goku is Bardock's youngest son. Some mysteries, how did they both end there ? are they saiyans or humans ? what about the Empire ? has Earth been conquered by Frieza ? I'm sure the answers will come eventually, but still I'm very curious. Vegeta seems uncomfortable living with Bulma and the others, he's still paranoid about a lot of things but maybe with Bulma's help, he'll overcome his fears and feeling of insecurity. And maybe he'll come to care for her too (Bulma seems to already have a crush on Vegeta, the way she keeps staring at him, and let's not forget she finds him handsome...if Vegeta knew! ;) Oh and another thing : Tights, Bulma's sister, is barely or pratically never mentioned in DB, DBZ or DB GT, it's kind of refreshing to see the interaction between the two Briefs sisters here, before Tights was announced, I thought it was Bunny, Bulma's mother, they're both blondes, hehe! Please update soon! |
Anon chapter 3 . 2/11/2016 I normally don't read post-apocalyptic stories but I'm glad I gave this a shot! I like the interaction between vegeta and bulma and can't wait to find out what happens next |