| Reviews for Percy Jackson: The Demon Rites |
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   ShadowThanatos chapter 23 . 8/4 I really liked this chapter! I really wanted Nico to join back with Bianca, but you didn't do that, so now I am a bit sad because it seems like Nico is playing the role of Ethan Nakamura, which means that Nico could die. Even tho this might happen, I can't wait for the next chapter |
| ShadowThanatos chapter 1 . 8/3 This was definitely better than your first chapter in the other story! I can't wait to read the next chapter! (which I am about to do) |
| remember-remember chapter 23 . 7/3 Enjoying these last few chapters, they seem better written than the earlier ones! |
| Guest chapter 23 . 7/2 This is really good! Can’t wait to see the next update’ |
| BlackJackkk12 chapter 23 . 6/3 Continue the story! |
| TheDesertFox12 chapter 23 . 5/18 Keep it up! |
| TheDesertFox12 chapter 22 . 5/18 Helmet of Terror is Deimos' thing. Hades has the Helm of Darkness. |
| AEceros chapter 22 . 5/10 I’m not so sure about escalating Artemis’ and Percy’s relationship so quickly. At most it would believable as a passing interest or fleeting infatuation, but to call it love is too significant, especially considering the inherent resistance from Artemis’ history. Perhaps it’s just Aphrodite being overzealous and quickly labeling something before it’s time, but it did not seem written that way. Percy and Artemis just need to spend WAY more time together before any meaningful relationship can take place. They’re not even friends, much less love interests. I’m excited about their little adventure though. You write adventure conflicts and progression well on top of pretty decent world building. Interesting story ideas with entertaining responses from characters. Excited to see what’s next! If you need to spend time to recover, take it! Personal health is very important. Wish you the best. |
| TheDesertFox12 chapter 20 . 4/10 pls update |
| Variety Of Choices chapter 10 . 3/28 wait.. so the swords actually good!? :o |
| TheDesertFox12 chapter 21 . 3/26 So good, pls update! |
| TheDesertFox12 chapter 15 . 3/26 This is so so very good, one of the best fics out there. I hope you update it soon and complete this fic. It would be quite a shame if this was abandoned. |
| en jaune chapter 21 . 1/27 Percy's life is a humongous clusterfuck XD |
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/25 This was a good chapter hope you are doing good now |
| The Prince of Souls chapter 20 . 1/10 Just a little notice to any of you guys who check the reviews - i hope you all had a good Christmas and New Year! I am in the process of writing the new chapter, so it should be out soon. Sorry for the delay, I will explain things in the chapter. Once again thank you guys! ~The Prince of Souls |
