| Reviews for Tag By MugiwaraFluff (One-shot) |
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   sarge1130 chapter 1 . 9/24/2015 Nice one-shot, love the LawLu moments. Love it how Law agreed on playing tag with Luffy. I kind of imagine it and I find it cute :). Like the smut. Also the ending is cute, love the LawLu cuddle moment. |
| Monkey D. Anea chapter 1 . 9/21/2015 I'm very sorry for this but you need to seperate the dialogue, but I really like this lemon! way better than mine! - Sorry didn't feel like login'n |
| I am Dead and Gone chapter 1 . 9/23/2015 Hot LawLu one-shot! I love it and I enjoy the LawLu's sex scene a lot. I think you should separate the dialogue and the paragraph a little more in order to be easy to read. |
| Rei-the-Rat chapter 1 . 9/22/2015 I think this story has potential, and you too. You need separate your paragraphs a little more. Maybe see if you can find a beta who will help you with this? |
| Staticy Fox Atra chapter 1 . 9/21/2015 Okay, sorry for the criticism, but you need to separate each person's dialogue so it could be easier to read. |
