I've only just found this story but it's already one of my favourites. I'm so glad that Dylan came round to being a dad and they decided on a name together. I was wondering if you thinking about writing a sequel when Ava's older? I'd love to see that! This was a great idea and it was written perfectly!

This story is so good! I love how you've written Dylan: it was absolutely agonising to see him wrestling with the idea of being a father but it's lovely how he finally came around to it. I really loved the beginning of this chapter, reading Dylan acting tenderly towards Rita and Ava. I can't wait to read more of this story: I wish I'd found it sooner! (The conversation between Zoe and Dylan in the last chapter nearly made me cry, it was so perfect!)

Oh my goodness that was so moving. All the best babies are breech (can you guess what I was?) Talk about needing a doctor who can detach themselves from all emotion in a situation like that. Who better than Dylan? It was his conversation with Zoe that hit me the hardest. I have lost count of the number of times this fanfic has made me cry! I've always been intrigued to know of Rita's family situation... I wonder if she'd have anyone to ring other than Dixie?

OMG! I'm loving this so much! Scared for Rita tho, breach delivery I expect is not very nice...
You're writing is brill!

Oh my goodness breach delivery ok I'm scared for them now Can't wait to read the next update!

Oh. It'll be a shame (imo) if this goes the freechamp route - hopefully this is just you keeping us on our toes as your content exploring Zoe/Dylan , Rita/Dixie and Rita and Dylan's preparation to be parents has been so original, believable and brilliantly written so far that I'm dying to read more of it! It was so sweet to read of Rita's developing relationship with her daughter here too even before she's been born - cute scene. You can really imagine her being the most adorable mum :)

Why do I get the feeling that the boat trip is not going to be a good idea with Rita so heavily pregnant? Eek! Loving reading about these late stages of her pregnancy it's making me feel quite broody. And glad my babies were born in hospital! :)
Odd how there are such a lot of anon reviews all saying the same thing about Rita & Dylan...
Keep up the good work I am always v excited to see update emails for this fic :)

DYLAN AND RITA WOULD BE THE PERFECT COUPLE!

dylan and rita would be great becos they can support each other through the baby and there is love there dylan is just too scared to tell and show rita how much he loves her.

DYTA ALL THE WAY!

Oh gosh Rita and Dylan would be such a cute couple you should DEFINITELY get them together otherwise it will be really sad

Rita and Dylan will be really good together now he's sorted himself out. He clearly loves her

Another great chapter. I love the way you write Zoe and Dylan together. I still don't think there's a romantic spark with Rita and Dylan at all so that doesn't get my vote. I'm always going to say that Rita and Iain make the cutest couple. (read one or 2 of my fanfics for more inspiration!) He's just a sweet bloke who always wants to help people and he's known Rita and Dixie for ages...
Or Rita and Dixie? You write those 2 really naturally too and they've obviously got a bit of past history too. (I'd also say you shouldn't count votes from anons as they are probably all the same person! )

I'm loving this! It's amazing!
Still sticking with the fact that Dylan and Rita shouldn't get together yet, maybe in the future but not now. Rita needs someone else...

Brilliant update!

I'm still loving this!
Don't want Dylan and Rita to get together just yet, think Rita should have a chance with someone else first...