more pretty please

More please

Lol, ooops! Guess they didn’t think of that. So, will someone suggest they be checked for potions and spells? After all, if Dumbledore did it to him, why not them?

Your story is so good, please continue with it.

Heh. Nice story.

Oh my, I love this fanfic. Especially love that Draco is in this new world too.

(Hehehe, one of the funniest things is how famous Alex/Harry is in the Muggle world ahahaha. I just can't get over it. Love that!)

It's fun seeing the DMLE getting called and that student punished. I would like to see the teachers chastised as well but I really like Severus and let's face it he learned bad habits from Dumbledore. Not that I am excusing him, but damnit I am sooooo so biased in his favor XD

Really want to see Alex and Draco become good friends. Will wait patiently for you to come back to this.

Thank you and good luck!

Too bad that you stopped this story. It's kind of nice.

Great story!

Oh my gosh I am LOVING THIS AMAZING FIC! Brilliant, brilliant writing here honey! I adore the characters you have created here along with the truly kick-ass plot line you have going! Keeping my fingers crossed for more soon as I cannot wait to see what happens next! ;o)

Hello,
Just wanted to tell you I really like your story and hope you will update it soon. To tell you the truth, it is so interesting that I foregone going to bed and spent the night reading away :D
Good doses of drama, humor and adventure too.
Keep up the good work and thanks for the read,
Nathalie

Nice story. I like it.

I like this. So Lily decided to give up Harry because they were told he was a squib and did not want her sons to grow up like her and her sister. I can understand this, as she loved her sister and the pain it caused her for her own sister to reject her was too painful. It was this pain that she wanted to spare her own children, for that alone I could forgive her. She wanted the best for her child and did not want him to grow into a bittier and hatful man. I am not condoning her or James for giving him up and disowning him, but I can understand why. I can not wait to see the next chapter and what will happen. I think it would also be a good idea for Harry to report Dumbledore for attacking him and trying to steal his familiar and inform them that for attacking the Heir of Emrys Albus Dumbledore has been evited from Hogwarts and permanently barred from Hogwarts as a result. Have Alex begin to destroy Dumbledore's influence now, so that it will be easier to deal with him later.

Enjoyed the chapter. I notice some spelling a grammar problems, so let me turn you on to my favorite writer's tool, it is a free program from grammarly dot com. It acts as a kind of editor helping with spelling, grammar, punctuation, sentence structure and word choice. It's major flaw is that it uses American not British grammar and spelling. Hope it helps. good luck.

I was willing to look past the terrible spelling and the mistakes in grammar thinking it would improve the more you write and I was enjoying the plot but I can't get past the fact you have made Harry into an over powered bully it is just to out of character.

great so far ~ a little different from other stories I read before ~ I Like It! .