This was beautiful. It's great seeing a good poly story that feels natural, where everything just fits and you can feel the love they share. Far too often poly relationships are forced in, if you see them at all

Absolutely beautiful! Not something I had chance to read but now that I did, I must say I absolutely love it! It was wonderful to read and I enjoyed it very much! Thank you for sharing!

OMG great story. I can't wait to read the rest of it. Ur amazing

All of this was tremendous fun but I think what I'm enjoying the most is the peeks at Mal and Evie while they were growing up. It tells the tale of how they got together succinctly while still giving room for time to pass in their lives between important moments.

All I can say is the fake sleep to get carried to bed is just too darn cute! And I love how this story is going step by step instead of just jumping right into everything.

Really nice start! I've seen a lot of threesome and moresome relationships where how it started didn't make sense. single girl in the Harry Potter universe all seem to love him... You didn't have Ben jump on the 'whoo hoo' I get two girls for the price of one bandwagon and I absolutely love that.

It's hard finding good polyamorous stories and I think you handled it well. I liked how you built up the relationship between the three. That even though Ben and Evie agreed to give their relationship a try to make Mal happy, they came to love each other as well. Anyways, great job and lovely story!

Good interaction between Jay and Ben
Like the contrast to the usual royal weddings. Those other royals must be fuming at that
Surprise with Snow White, particularly given your clever mentioning earlier. That she got involved with all 7 dwarves was done mockingly by a VK in another fic, but you made it nice here, and a wonderful connection with Evie
Like the line about Mal's protectiveness
Nice wedding, hope you write at least one more chapter! :-)

But seriously, who DID make the laws about being king at 16 and married at 17? Recipe for disaster. Especially since it was my understanding that since this is a united kingdom the laws were all written during the last generation

Aww heartwarming indeed

Good remembering that Adam brought back all of the villains to punish them
Nice point that Evie would want an actual parental figure. LOL Pavlov

Like how the girls are not afraid of Ben, but afraid FOR Ben during all of that

Very appropriate story, working through some of the harder times. Particularly liked the touch that Mal nearly tore off the door to the nurse office even without magic. Also that Ben likes ALL the VKs because of how they treat him no differently than anyone else

Very good angry Ben, and making clear that an attack on the girls is an attack on him

While the guy in me likes the idea of an M ending to this, I think you should stay away from it and stay with the sort of content you have so far that works so well

Another fun chapter!

the audience applauds at the epic finale! love this story to bits