Intriguing! Hope you continue this!

Would love to read more :)

This is wonderful. I would love to read if you write more!

Very interesting story, and thank you for the notes at the end! It's so strange to think of Edward in *any* situation where he has this little control over his own life. It's quite difficult to predict how it would affect his personality. At least he still has his artistic side, though his muse is also enslaved. Anyway, it's a cool mytho-historical setting for an interesting tale. Always lovely when writers to their homework! :)

I cannot describe my excitement at seeing that you are writing here again!

Selfishly I do entirely hope you continue to write it.

Apart from the suspense that you have built I was enthralled with the descriptions of Alexander's life.

Thank you for sharing it and I look forward to to you next chapter!

This was such an interesting story. I really hope you find the time to continue it. /sorry you didn't win. Thanks for sharing the story & the background info.

I actually read this one as a contest entry and liked it then. If you decide to continue it I will certainly read it.

Great story. Would love to see it continued.

It seems like this is the prologue for an interesting story. The question I had from the contest is does she stay in his world, or does he go to hers? Maybe I'll get to find out at some later date.

:) loved this. I hope you do write more

I'm so glad that you've posted a new story! Thanks for writing and for sharing!

Congrats on this well-researched and captivating fic. I hope it will be the beginning of a longer one.

All the best,

- Raum

Sorry you didn't win anything, but I really enjoyed your story and your Notes was interesting. I think you should consider continuing it:-) Thanks for sharing.