I LOVE this!

way fun to read

So glad you have enjoyed my reviews! I really love reading your stuff and this final chapter has in no way disappointed me at all. You write so beautifully it literally pulls me and sends me to another place. What a wonderful thought provoking piece and even with very little dialogue your writing is amazing. Great job - thanks for providing such great prose duing Raphril week - I love Raphril! (well, I love Raphael!) x

D, this was just beautiful. Your way with words in this one had me imagining every detail. I especially loved the part about the icicles; that whole paragraph was simply stunning. Gorgeous and sad, I really enjoyed this one, and I'm so glad you had something ready for every day of Raphril Week! It has been a highly enjoyable read, even if I was a week late.

Here's hoping you find time to breathe within your busy schedule, and that more of your writing will pop into my inbox whenever you're able to do so. :)

TINY GREY HONDA CIVIC! THAT WAS MY FIRST CAR! (Sorry, had to get that out, haha!)

Weird as it may sound, it was nice to see Raph hulking out a bit. I'm so used to 2012 Raph who - while he does have a temper - tends to have fewer problems in this area, and while I haven't seen the 2014 movie yet, it definitely seems like that Raph would have far more problems with it. nice work!

I am not gonna lie, I had a very strong urge to bust out my Scrabble board and see if I could line up all these words to work in real life. XD But this was so adorable! I know I've been saying that a lot, but it's true! Raph stealing ideas from Donnie? Priceless! And with Raph's penchant for birds, I really did think that maybe he just knew it! LOL Loved it!

Bahaha, cute! I admit I have a soft spot for the episode this one is based on, and I enjoyed the fact that you used Sir Malachi to introduce some of your typical "Raph gets changed/powers" ideas into this one. :) Very creative having him be the dragon, though I admit I was hoping he and April would band together and defeat the other four in battle, haha. Very fun and creative, though! The sort of thing I've come to expect and look forward to from you!

This was so cute and (no pun intended) sweet! Loved how Raph was all "if he was going to go down anyway, he might as well go down in a blaze of glory" and just decided to snap at her - seems very Raph, haha. He really, deeply cares, even if with his temper it doesn't always seem like it. And while unfair to snap in the first place, it's totally understandable why April would. Life without chocolate is a sad, sad life.

(Also, I'm imagining 2014 April "ripped to the nines" and trying so hard not to laugh.)

Ahhhh, this one just hits all the right buttons for me! Raph nursing a pigeon and going to April for help, April working through exactly why he couldn't go to Donnie and obliging, and of course the adorable ending. The writing also felt very flowing and almost poetic in this one. Loved all the details! Great job!

Cons are over, and I'm finally catching up, D! Raphril Week starts now! lol Poor 2012 Raph - not only is he one of the shortest, but 2014 Raph is one of the tallest in the franchise. Must be pretty intimidating! This was cute! Onward to chapter 2...

Your writing is beautiful.

I'm totes confused. How did April die? Did Raph just die?! WHAT IS LIFE?!

omg that was amazing

My gosh, your grasp of the English language is phenomenal... This chapter broke me but it was a beautiful book-end to this series and it feels...right somehow. I still can't thank you enough for contributing to this week and just giving me the tremendous joy of getting to read your work! So sad Raphril Week is over, but I'll be looking forward to next year! ;-) *hugs*

What you like? That my friend was hilarious and lovey dovey all at the same time! You are amazing and write so incredibly well that I am more than impressed. I don't even like 2014 April (aka Megan Fox) but this was really good fun to read. just imagining Raph squashed in a normal car had me giggling already!