Praise the Log!

So much for being widely acclaimed to hit its stride in chapter 13, I think it was better before this Kiri arc.

Why did you even bother having Nanashi know the Harashin if he is never able to use it? just another way you are trying to pointlessly nerf the shit out of nanashi. Is he ever going to be a powerful Shinobi again or is he just going to stay at the A rank for the rest of the story?

I think you need to work on your humor a little bit because i could tell that the beginning of this chapter was supposed to be funny but it wasnt at all. I just realized you put the humor tag on your story but i really cant think of even one actual funny moment so far.

So can he not use sage mode because he is not alive? but if that was the case how was Hashirama able to enter sage mode when he was an Edo Tensai?

Why did you nerf naruto so hard? Obviously taking away the Kyuubi makes sense cuz he would just be overpowered, but why take away sage mode as well its not like naruto was the only person to ever master sage mode. fucking stupid. Can barely beat Anko in a fight and shes not even a full jonin.

Why would signing the Toad contract dictate weather or not he could enter Sage Mode? The toads taught naruto how to use nature chakra and enter sage mode they arnt necessary for it. Hashirama and Madara could both enter sage mode and they were edo tensai, and Madara learned it by reverse engineering Hashiramas techniques not from summons. Its never explained how hashirama learned it but you can assume the Mokuton allowed him to connect with nature on a deeper level and learn sage mode on his own. Summons are not a neccasary part of sage mode, just some of the few users of sage mode and thus some of the only teachers available. If Naruto knows how to enter sage mode he should be able to.

Yo this is and has been one of my fav stories on this site. We all miss you and hope your doing ok! Im gonna keep this in my follow list regardless of if you ever do update it again, juuuust in case you do come back.

This is by far my favorite fanfiction, and I’ve read over a thousand. I check every couple weeks (since 2015) to see if it’s updated, and it always made my week when it did. Please don’t abandon this story! It’s a work of art, and I’d love to read more!

All that talk, and then you abandoned it anyways. Just barely a quarter of the way to your "one million words" boast. What a joke. Guess it was a good thing you put all that in the first chapter so we could be warned off early.

"your brain is still slightly swollen"... dude, if ur brain is swollen ur probably in a comma, u can't function properly, let alone stay conscious with a swollen brains. All the blood vessels will probably burst due to the pressure of the swelling, and u would get a stroke, but instead of in one specific location, ur whole brain would get it

This is post 4th war, why doesn't naruto have sage-of-six-path powers? he doesn't need kurama for it, kurama literally just gives him a chakra boost, doesn't affect his other skills and powers

Your summary is way off for me. Too confident I must say. Oh well I gave it a try. I'm not mistaken, you're boastful, more bark than work. Time travel DONE RIGHT? pfft.

the story is goos. i hoped to read more chapter.

Fuck why did you have to end Mei and Nanashi's relationship like that after all that to top it all off you made hm betray her goddamit