Kudos,please stay safe.

Its a well written story, but its boring as well.

This is a real twist to the story. I love it. Especially the part where Shikako uses he killer intent full blast on Sayu and Misa. Honestly I hope she give Misa a world of pain for killing Yugo. And Sayu? I hope Shikako gives her the most extreme big sister beat down of a life time- Kunoichi style! With her previous mom Yoshino’s signature scariness. Seriously I hope her experience as a Kunoichi who’s had to kill people before comes into play when punishing/reprimanding/confronting/ taking those two into account because seriously I get that one of them is young and immature but to message up that badly and mess with hectic things like death and not even caring about the consequences and problem they are causing. Not even stopping to consider the innocent people getting hurt. I don’t know if that’s selfishness, brattyness, cowardice, madness or all of it at once. And their way of thinking in general just irritates me. Oh we only just kill a police chief and an innocent girl accidentally on purpose, nothing major. Seriously no accountability what so ever, it’s like they don’t comprehend the gravity or graveness of what they’ve done and just think it’s okay and can just move on and all is fine and dandy. I seriously hope they get the sense knocked into them SEVERELY, because that kind of thinking is just not okay. On another note the fact that your antagonist characters are able to antagonize me so much means you are doing a good job with characterization so well done . Please continue with the story. I look forward to the next chapter, if you do plan on posting it someday.

First off can I just applaud the Jack Sparrow reference? That was damn amazing . “But why’s the tea gone?” Ha! Loved it. In fact this has got to be my most favorite chapter! She really had them going with the disappearing tea? I love how you could tell she had something to do with it with how everyone else’s tea was disappearing while she was still sipping her completely chill with the situation. The image in my head was so comical. And then the you’re drunk thing completely killed me. And Ls indignant reaction! Priceless. I would pay money to see that scene played out. Magnificent. Beautiful! Absolutely brilliant.

wow, you did a good job! I actually at one point thought you botched the timeline because I remember thinking "It's obviously Light, but the writing barely supports it anymore! Ugh at this rate it makes more sense for *Sayu* to be Kira. ha, that'd be different!" here's hoping that if you never get around to finishing this story you can at least summerise the ending. Also, I'm thinking Light also snuck use of the Death Note - either by getting another one or stealing the paper from Shikako and Sayu. Honestly, I'm hoping Shikako manages to get a handle on her ridiculous murder siblings and end up the leader of the Psychic Children.

This story is amazing. I hope you will write more.

Sooo... is the Avatar fic real? Because I love the idea of it and your story is *really* gripping. I read all of this in one sitting. You’re really good at evoking emotions from your readers. I was captivated and constantly absorbed. There isn’t a word I can think of to quite describe it. (I still really want to know if Nukka of Avatar is a real thing though)

So interesting but I wonder, if they wrote her name down, will it kill her? Well...her original name anyways.

I should really have more faith in you

Uh, I didn't think she'd want to be in on the case that fast, not would she have expected them to even let her. That was kind of fast, was expecting more plot development before she was inducted into the investigation...

Wow murder of an innocent person, I hope she gets caught and sent to jail.

I read all of these chapters repeatedly and never bored with them. Though, I'm waiting for the next chapter.

...okay. Sayu is crazy. Okay then.

what Avatar fanfic are you talking about? I can't find it.

enjoyed it, very creative, it doesn't follow the story line too closely which can get old in fanfiction