When will be the next chapter?

OKAY what the fuck? You said he was going to be a solo team and wasn't going to have a ... team. One second the story was great and then arc 2 turns into a whole harem and low-level writing plot? Damn

This story started out great until this chapter. How did he get a team when he was solo? Why didn't he tell the Hokage about a huge threat and what the fuck is going on with the plot?

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Continue please

I thought you said he would not have any team? Honestly if he runs into Orichimaru in that forest there is no way he would last ten seconds. Only reason Naruto did is the Kyuubi.

Damn he is so weak. Most of the teams in the exam will murder him. And he lost to a girl and lets her push him around. That kind of messed up relationship is sick and unhealthy. He should get his own place and stay away from the crazy chick.

Why the fuck is there already an Otsutsuki clan member there? That clan is way stronger than any people currently alive. Minato would get crushed.

Just going to put this out there, but with him not having high levels of chakra or an insane learning rate he will never be ready in time to fight people like Pain and Madara. Madara curb stomped an army by himself as well as all the Kage.

And he’s the chapter where I drop the story. Fucking dumb random ass OC really? Fucking trash

This story is stupid

I was enjoying this fanfic, it was well done and had good future prospects. Then, Naruto turns out weaker than he was portrayed to be and weaker than I expected him to be. Satsuki was an alright addition, then you just made him quite pathetic against her, Sasame and Anko. I mean come on. Satsuki and Sasame love with him, Sasame for free, he bought the house, Anko and her spend his money without his consent, then he has to work hard to get the money back, he’s shown as quite a bit weaker then them and you have all three of them just being bitches. And he doesn’t react. They are in his house, using his money without his consent, and he doesn’t even react. You literally made him their bitch. And I can’t read a fic where you have the main character with no backbone. She is flicking food in his face, that’s not funny just rude. It appears to be the common cliche of the male never being able to disrespect or go against the female in fear of getting abused.

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what im going to say will not make the story better or worse but if i was naruto and anko and satsuki and sasame did all of those things i would be furious and kick out sasame and anko. if they didnt leave i would have the authorities make them leave

things I think Naruto could've said, hokage can't I just go to T&I instead? or Hokage, request a mission to eliminate all the useless shinobi of Konoha...