I love continus

I love good job

Yaaas, Im excited for more chapters.

Take your time. I'll be waiting patiently

I wonder if Tobirama’s ever going to tell Sakumo the truth. Welcome back and thank you so much for updating!

Nice

I'm son happy you came back 3

Great chapter, I think that you finally cleared up the relationship that Sakumo has with Kagami nicely. Keep it up.

I'm glad Sakumo was able to give his kinmen a proper burial. Satoru and Mitsuo struck me as good men.

Brilliant piece of weiting right here boys and girls. Read and learn how to captivate an audience, draw them in and develop a plot that is not the same bullshit canon story.

It was cool seeing Sakumo fight alongside his kinsmen. I also like the theory you put forward in this one regarding Jiraiya's clan ties to Sakumo and later, Kakashi. Makes sense to me!

Cool twist, I had never considered Sakumo being the caretaker of Jiraya. update soon.

Wow, I just found this and I have to say that you have done an amazing job! I can't wait to see what happens next, and I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens when little Kakashi comes along.

Sakumo's kinsmen seem like good people!

So I read this whole story in one big glomp and I'm still digesting it. I feel rather like Sakumo and have no idea what is going on half of the time. At any rate, its entertaining and I admire you commitment to the story, despite the general populace ignorance of it. You really ought to have a higher review count because it's better that a good ninety percent written.

The rugged, wooded landscape that Sakumo traveled through on the way to Kazuya's secret spot was very beautiful!