Reviews for The Time Leo Elster Forgot
Guest chapter 7 . 7/21
Please consider continuing to write this one, I'm dying to know what happens!
AnchoredStar chapter 7 . 2/13/2019
This is amazing. I love how you portray the characters and the storyline is incredibly intriguing! Please continue:)
AMessofADreamerx chapter 7 . 5/21/2018
Idk how I haven't come across this earlier! I read it all in one go. The USB port is like genius, I love how Mattie cares for Leo, love/hate how Oberlin calls Leo it, and the fact he can transfer into a synth? Omg.

Also, I read this before going to bed, wanting to think on my review, and I won't tell you the whole dream, but at one point I was trapped in this room with Post Malone, my best friend, and this other guy Idk who, and twice a voice came from outside the door told me "it's time" when it was time to eat and "it's almost time for you to come upstairs" but I woke up before we went upstairs, and the voice was exactly how I imagined Wynken to be. So your story made a significant impact on me lol
graygirl chapter 7 . 3/23/2017
What a fun read. It's been a while so I'm guessing real life is taking up all your energy, but this story is so well paced and well written, it's not flowery, but imaginative writing. Well placed adjectives - not just random embellishment or anything, but used to give real descriptions of people, and stuff that's going on. So I just had to leave some quick feedback.

I love how you capture the atmosphere and the characters with your descriptions. I know, I'm not being very concrete here, sorry. But it's been a blast reading this so I'm basically here to say thanks.

Pretty sure lots of people read your story and love because it feels so naural and rot out of the Humans universe, but not enough people get on to say so, so here I am.

Loved it. :)
graygirl chapter 2 . 3/22/2017
Just searched for Humans stories and came across yours. Love how "honest" it is.

You capture Leo so well, not glossing over how he sometimes almost looks deranged and so unkempt. Yet also vulnerable. How he's so skinny and determined and at the same time so lost and I loved the part about how it's surprising he's survived against the world for so long.

And how Mattie isn't at all grossed out by him, just seems to be deeply feeling for him.

Also, love that Laura is there.

Thanks for sharing this on here. :)
TripleLLL chapter 7 . 2/21/2017
Now you having Leo do that was soooo cool.

And the ending us mean. If you continue the story please don't torture Leo for too long.

Otherwise awesome.
TripleLLL chapter 2 . 2/21/2017
I just watched all of humans season 2. Online after seeing 1st epp I was like screw this then found them all.

I love love love Leo. Mostly because of merlin but the facalhair makes him pretty darn sex to me.

I see you haven't updated in a long time. Watch season 2. Oh yea.
cupcakelover.mel chapter 7 . 1/27/2017
can't wait for more
WeatherKitten chapter 7 . 12/18/2016
This fanfiction is fantastic, please continue! The story has beautifully delved into the fate of Leo, a half synth who's still figuring out who he is. It has so many twists and turns, and the relationship between Leo has truly been captured. Well done, it feels like im reading a episode of Humans. Please finish this story :)
bowties-scarves-and-magic chapter 7 . 12/13/2016
Yay! Another chapter! I love this story, best fic of humans there is! Thank you for writing this :)
TWAMNationUna chapter 1 . 12/10/2016
Well done. I can actually see this as an episode.
Santa chapter 4 . 10/25/2016
OH MY GOD PLEASE CARRY ON WITH THIS ITS AMAZING YOU HAVE ME HOOKED
zendog chapter 1 . 10/1/2016
This is a great start to the story. Exciting, intriguing and mysterious. Good clear, crisp writing and charactisation. I especially liked the comparison between Mattie's clear headedness and Leo's increasing confusion.
Katie Katherine chapter 7 . 9/1/2016
Awesome. Please continue.
Mojito737 chapter 7 . 9/1/2016
God! I hate you and your bloody cliffhangers! Why are you torturing me this way! You have to understand that I am highly impatient reader!

To be honest It was great. That's it! That's why I hate waiting for new chapter! You always write it too great. ;)
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