I loved it.

I can't critisise any aspect of it.

I loved this fic. Your characters were so believable, and it was so sad in the end. I am a sucker for sad but touching things. Great job. Hope you write more great fics like this soon. Tata

I have loved this story right from the start, the ending was perfect, a very nice conclusion*

Tremendous. The final chapter was beyond awesome. Very moving.

LEt me catch my breath...you know I wanted Grissom and wow how we got him! Wonderful to see the...concerning Grissom. He was just right you know. He didn't say too much, he didn't say to little...he was totally in caracter and he was sooo sweeet.

Maybe I didn't see somthing but as Sara tell about Rainy...Grissom's conclusion is that she was twelve but she hasn't told him then when it had happened...am I missing something? YOu know I don't mean to be a nag or something like that, I hope you know that. It was just something that I wanted to point out.

And one more thing...about the epilogue...it's all of course up to you. I just wanted to say that i love this ending so I don't think it's necessary but as you know I love everything you write and I'm sure an epilogue would be just as breath taking as this chapter!

You really are awesome Dana!

Geena

*aplause* well done, that was a really touching story, it actually nearly brought me to tears. sooo... it was great, well done

I love this story...I like how you've built upto chapter six, introducing Rainey and everything* Update soon:D

OMG you almost got me crying here. I thought something was going to ahppen to Rainey but this dramatic? And Sara got hurt too? MY god this is just awful...I want the dad dead!

OOWWW you know I neeeeeeeeeeeddd Grissom right now! i need a hug!

Geena

This is such an amazing story! You've done such a fabulous job of expressing it. I was holding my breath when they were escaping from the house, and near tears at the end of the chapter. Thank-you for writing it and I hope you post more soon!

~Rory

Jane, Wow! I don't know what else to say. this is so powerful!

My nails are practically gone from the biting! Will someone find Sara? What happened to Mr. Davis? I wanna know! Hurry with the next chapter!

Excellent. You've done such a tremendous job with background. This chapter was awesome and very well done. I can't wait to read the next installment.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Very interesting and again, an awesome character study.

Oooooooo! Keep going! I hope there's going to be more of Sara's life AFTER this whole thing with Rainey! Keep writing!

omg! Leaving me like this?/! What the hell is wrong with Rainey? I wanna know., I wanna know(jumping up and down like an iriitating five year old girl!)

Geena