I know this is really late but overall I wasn't just reading the I for the whiterose stuff, I actually thought this was really good and was reading it because it was just a great story hopefully you're doing well in your new writing ventures and I'd leave to see some of your new stuff.

Weiss how dare you... This is really depressing.

While i get the struggle and the mental fight of being one who ships characters online...this...im just...cant really express how sad this makes me. i started reading this story and it was like a small light lit up, it was vampires, it was rwby, it had drama and conflict...it was the kind of story i really and truly loved, it really reminded me of Christopher Paolini's Inheritance Cycle. i know that by now you're probably long into your own original works, and like Ruby's thoughts of Weiss, the remembrance of checking on this account has probably long faded. but if by some miracle you ever do read this...i just have a request. could you take this story, and just...make it original? all you really have from this that is RWBY are names...if you could just replace Ruby...weiss, and Yang with original characters...and continue this story...i'd like that...its just...seeing it end like this...it cant end like this.

I know it's been like four years but I just wanted to say I enjoyed this story alot, shame you didn't finish it entirely but I'm glad you moved on to be a better writer, I will check out your other stories. And I was also wondering if your still writing your originals?

UPDATE

I LOVE THIS MATE LIKE YOOOOOOOO

Not a fan of time skips. Nope.

Yaaaaang!
I wanna cry.

This chapter was a bit exciting. I’m hooked.

I'll be honest i forgot about this till just recently seeing sangheilitat's name in my email, I can completely understand where he came from. its been years, but I enjoy knowing this story is laid to rest.

I only started reading your whiterose story's a few days ago and loved them all, and now I find out your not doing them anymore yeah I feel a bit dead on the inside.
But hey if eventually you feel like continuing whiterose like years from now I would still love to read them. ps what's your new account name so I read your new stuff.

Noooooo! You're one of the best White Rose writers out there, do you even know how few of those are there? *Sigh*

I'm sorry to see this story end as it has, and the end of you writing White Rose in general. But if you don't feel the characters, then you don't feel the characters. There's no point forcing a sham. I'd just like to thank you for what you have written here, as it is some of the best writing I have see in the fandom. I wish you luck in your future endeavors, and hope your passion for writing in general never wanes.

I'm not going to go all victim blaming or whatever since you don't even consider my reviews worth anything anyway so I'm just gonna say my piece and fuck off.

I know you don't like me, nor the way I nitpicked at your writing. You have a lot of pride and ego and it pisses you off that someone with the same amount of pride and ego as you decided to tear your work apart.

But I have to say I saw this coming a mile away. That one chapter I reviewed that caused you to blow up on me, I saw the signs right there and then. When I said it 'felt rushed' due to the spacing of the paragraphs and the number of typos and errors, by then to me it already felt like someone was just churning out he chapter for the sake of just wanting to write something without thinking too hard about it. Frankly speaking, it didn't feel like your heart was in it. Felt empty, in comparison with your earlier chapters. I was completely into the story but chapter 7 fell flat on it's face.

A writer's state of emotion and heart is very clearly expressed in their writing. Even if they try to hide it, it slips out in their writing, and here's the clincher, the writer themselves would not notice at all because to them there is no difference. But in the eyes of a reader, it becomes very obvious.

Dropping entirely out of fanfiction is understandable, especially with the mediocrity of fandoms in general these days, NOT just RWBY, but you need to change your attitude if you're planning to continue to write. Especially if you're gonna do originals from now on.

But whatever come may, I wish you good luck. Though honestly, this is probably the last you'll see of me since I don't exactly read original English fiction either. I get bored easily by long narratives of descriptions of shit and half the novels I've tried reading never kept my interest or longer than a chapter or two.

But anyways, Goodbye, and good luck.

You are one of my idols here in fanfiction. Honestly, too many of my favorite writers here have disappeared and things aren't the same anymore. But, I understand. We all have to grow and as a fellow writer myself (although I never posted on this site), I understand that feeling.

And as much as I want to get into Whiterose, I too, can't for whatever reason. It isn't the same as before and it feels... empty reading about them now. I do love them and they will always hold a special place in my heart, as with your wonderful works about Whiterose.

Kudos to you and thank you for everything! Good luck, I hope you become very successful with your writing. :)

-your avid reader.