A superb job. I feel sorry the rebels Vlad’s sending Wraith after.

Oh Man... it is going to be really hard for Danny to get through to his cuz.

Hmm, interesting... Poor Dani.

You did another excellent job. So I wonder how long it will be before Vlad considers using the device on himself.

So this is getting pretty grim. I hope Danielle is able to be saved. You did a superp job by the way.

Okay, yeah, this one definitely feel like there is a bit more going on in it.

Trying to remember who Big Danny is... I'm thinking from FoP... Wanda's Dad?

Poor Dani... it's going to be a lot harder for Danny to get threw to her then in DP.

So Skulker’s back. That’s good. You did good with the Box Ghost.

... Okay, at the start of this, I didn't mind the short chapter length too much (if partially because of how often it was updated) but now that one of my favorite characters has shown up and is finally getting an arc dedicated to her, the fact that so few things are happening each chapter is very annoying (especially as the updates aren't as often now while chapter length is still the same).

You did a great job. So does Vlad care about Wraith aka Dani? Cause I’m pretty sure she’ll switch sides.

Darn, I was hoping fr a bit more... then again lots and lots of short chapters is kinda what this whole story is about, isn't it?

Pretty good. But I noticed a grammatical error.

This is great!

Okay, Location taken from FoP, and now Dani can finally make her official appearance.

So its an oc from the starwars universe and not a true crossover, got ya

Okay... only took about, what? 40 or so chapters, but now Dani is here.
Granted, these chapters rarely go over 1K words and this one didn't even reach 400, so it ain't that long story-wise.