This story was great especially after they solved the case. I really enjoyed reading about their vacation. Can't wait to read about their trip to Europe.

Another great story! Can't wait to see what else you have in store for this family!:)
-A

This epilogue puts a very nice end to a really fun story.
Although they only spent two weeks or so in California, somehow it seemed longer, and I was kinda sad they had to say goodbye to their friends. I hope we'll see them again soon.
I wasn't surprised at all at the reactions to Castle finding his father, it was what I was expecting from them. Martha is a wise woman, and a very resilient one, an although now she's hurt, she'll recover quickly I'm sure.
And I'll agree with Castle, who knows what they'll find on their next vacation, whatever it is I'm sure they'll have a great time while doing it.
It was a really fun, interesting story. I can't wait to start reading the next one.

I like how Kate and Rick with a new book, found a new life in their love making. I like how the family settles in.

Congrats on another great story.

I like how David, Rebecca, and Mari and Dani, joined everyone during the pool time. And they told Martha and Alexis of what happened with Rick's father. Good to know that Martha accepted what happened.

Another fun couple of chapters, although it was a zoo! There was no way I wouldn't enjoy that immensely, even my feet hurt sympathetically!
I enjoyed Eliza being moody for a change, she's a really well behaved little girl, I know, but it's refreshing seeing her act like that when she's tired and hungry, they all had a very busy day after all.
Also loved that both Skye and Beckett still find it weird seeing the other one just being a mother... It's not just me, then.
And Beckett is right, Alexis is the original babysitter, what are they going to do when she's at Oxford for so long?
I'm obviously having too much fun with this, I really can't wait for whatever is next.

Great chapters! Love them as a family and when they are alone!;)
-A

I like the tiger reference in the chapter. Rick seems to fit in with the girls when they go adventuring around the zoo. The M moment is very well written. And they have to go home.

I like the zoo as well. I can see the kids go and explore the zoo.

I like the M moment in the chapter. They always find ways to be happy. I like how kids are having fun with Skye and Mary.

I like the serious talk between Skye and Kate.

Very fun couple of chapters.
They are most definitely enjoying their trip, and it helps a lot having the McDouglases as tour guides. It always helps to have some friend-approved activity when visiting new places.
I loved that Beckett still doesn't believe in any supernatural stuff, but doesn't give Castle, or Skye actually, a hard time for it, she just walked away and left them to talk ghosts.
Old Town was fun, but I can't wait to see what they do at the zoo. I kinda love those ;)

Cute! So glad that you decided to include their trip to Disneyland.

Both chapters were great! Looks like the family had a great time at Disney!:)
-A

Great chapters. They had a really fun day, but they have to be exhausted after all that.
I know those girls are really well behaved, but I cringed anyway when Alexis volunteered to take them all alone. She's really brave.
Again, I loved all the tiny details you put in your descriptions, made me feel like I was there with them.
It was a lot of fun reading this, I can't wait to see what you have for us next.