| Reviews for Bonded of Cadis Etrama di Raizel |
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Tin chapter 1 . 5/28 Nice Story, Please More Update |
RoswellianMisha chapter 38 . 5/26 Ahhhhh what a wonderful story! Full of incredibly deep insights, plausible backgrounds, and an immersive world-building. What more could I ask -except that you might return and tell us more? Your story was exactly what I needed after finishing the webtoon-would love to know what you thought of that ending, too-and you gave me plenty of food for thought. I cracked up at how you integrated The Noblesse cafe chain into the story, cause that was definitely weird. I had this picture in my mind where the kids learn that Rai is The Noblesse, and they would say "Wait, like the coffee shop?" and totally getting it wrong. I also loved the insight that Tao created RKs because he already belongs to a group before, and how everyone ended up learning about hugs. Also, the explanation as to why Rai has so. many. uniforms. 'Cause when I saw that in the webtoon, I was left wondering "doesn't he just wave his hand and get his clothing, anyway?" Harsh punishment for the fifth elder here, but then again, she was no saint. The original story usually redeemed the bad guys, but when you think about it, some of those really were redeemed too easily with hardly any mention of the evils they committed. I'm glad you dealt with Crombel right away, that's for sure. The only thing that I wish had been covered in your story was Musaka's awakening, cause Rai's friend is such a big part of Rai and his emotional state and well-being. In any case, I'm just glad to know everyone's safe for the time being, getting to become a family and to expand their horizons beyond the soldier, the loner, or the isolated. Hope you come back soon with more awesome Noblesse! |
RoswellianMisha chapter 9 . 5/17 I love this story. I love the insights you give, the way Frankenstein thinks. I laughed so hard at how scitific the whole hugging thing is! I just discovered Noblesse a couple of months ago and finished the story last week. Your fanfic is exactly what I needed to continue my fix XD Thank you for such detailed story and so many in-depth perspectives of the psychology of all these characters :D |
EndlessGalaxies97 chapter 38 . 5/7 I love your writings of Noblesse! I hope you make more of them as I look forward to a new chapter after working all day. I don't know if you do requests, but I'd love to see your thought process of Frankenstein during the couple of days he was kidnapped and pretended to be under mind control by Dr. Ari's and Yuri. Love Frankie and Rai special moments! Hope you are well and safe. Thanks for writing such awesome fanfiction for this underrated series! |
Tin chapter 38 . 3/1 Please Update More. |
Guest chapter 38 . 10/3/2019 I really like this story. You are an excellent writer and I admire the amount of effort and thought that you clearly put into the details and world building of the story. It makes for a rather enjoyable read. |
Guest chapter 38 . 6/28/2019 Cap plis |
Shiary chapter 38 . 2/22/2019 lovely chapter |
entergrg chapter 18 . 2/8/2019 Seven billion Frankies - and all of them the type to not listen! The pure agony! lol |
entergrg chapter 16 . 2/8/2019 This was a great character study of both Raizel and Franken! |
entergrg chapter 15 . 2/7/2019 At first I was confused as to why Franken was having a breakdown, but I realized halfway through the story and had an "oooooh" moment XD And the punishment... as someone with workaholic tendencies, I can kind of see how that can be a punishment... poor Franky! |
entergrg chapter 8 . 2/4/2019 I really loved this chapter! I love your character study of Tao. I also love your portrayal of Franken and Raizel as adoring parents :D |
entergrg chapter 5 . 2/3/2019 I like your take on the Noblesse's "death" and how it differs from the Eternal Sleep. Also, just as a side note - according to Noblesse novel, Franky lived about 1000 years with Raizel before he went into deep sleep/hibernation 820 years ago. So I think Franky is around 2000 years old - maybe born around 1 AD? :) |
entergrg chapter 4 . 2/3/2019 Tao's contraptions were sooo hilarious! And dear Rai trying to spare Franky any amount of pain possible :'( even though his biggest pain is seeing his master suffer. I'm really enjoying the story so far - thanks for the wonderful story! |
Krysten Lee Wheeler chapter 11 . 1/31/2019 I love your story, so I'm rereading it again XD But I have to wonder if you plan on making Lunark and Kenya's survive the explosion so they can have their redemption ark, or if you plan on leaving them dead? |