The little 'dancing party' got me smiling, giggling and even blushing like an idiot the whole time in both, this and Stan's side.
I'd pay to see that animated, I swear.

This is a good ending to a good story. I'm glad everything worked out in the end. Excellent work with this story.

Aww, what a sweet, happy chapter. It's nice that they were able to patch things up. Good work.

So much anger and raw feelings in this chapter. In a way it's good that they get all those feelings out on the table. It's even better that Ford saw that it wasn't entirely his brother's fault. This is a good chapter and very well written.

Dramatic and angsty. You did good with writing the emotions.

Seeing Ford interact and get along so well with Dipper is nice. It's a good contrast to the drama at the end. Good chapter.

It's interesting to see that entire episode through Ford's eyes. I do like that he felt a little hurt when Stan denied him as family when he told him to stay away from the kids-he may have changed, but he's still human. Good chapter.

Whoa, Ford sure has changed during his time in the portal. The part where he doesn't believe in love anymore made me sad. It's interesting how good of a fighter he's become (especially when he used to scold Stan for it), but I suppose he had to in order to survive. Good chapter.

The beginning of the chapter sure is scary with plenty of terrifying details. No wonder Fiddleford lost his sanity just seeing a glimpse of it.

The parts where Ford is recovering are nicely done as he slowly remembers. Nice chapter.

Wow, a good suspenseful chapter. This is a good addition to that episode. You did good with writing the emotions. Nice chapter.

Wow, so much in one chapter. It's such a difference from when Ford first met Bill to when he realized he was betrayed. You did good with writing the fear and bit of paranoia there at the end. Your story is fun to read because of all the good details you include. Nice chapter.

Such a sad chapter. I'm glad to see that Ford was upset after Stan got thrown out. All of the emotions in the second half of the chapter are realistic. Nice work.

Nice chapter. You did good with writing his concern while waiting for Stan to return and his anger after he did. Stan's reaction to Ford's worries are in character for him too. Good work.

This is too sweet. It's kind of sad to read knowing what happened between the two later on. For now it's just a nice moment of happiness. Also, this chapter is very well written. Nice work.

These two were both amazing! Thank you for writing it! It was wonderful to read.

Oh no! The feels! They're coming for me!Oh no-ahughadgh-HNNNNNNNNNNNG!