This is cute. This is how I like to picture Mac and Dick. Healing each other. And falling in love in the process. Perfection.

They totally work as a couple.

FABULOUS. SO BELONG TOGETHER!
sequel please

LOVE it!

You did a great job with imagery & it's in that sexy one-shot style I love so much-that perfect economy of words, a lot said in so little!

Thanks for sharing!

Really good, you should continue as a story.

So good, so emotive. I can feel the emotions in every word. I can feel them falling in love reading this. Love it. So glad I found it.

Loved this! Wish you would write a longer story, but I'll take what I can get.

Loved reading Dick's POV, and the line "and every part of him feels like this is it — this is what keeps people singing and coming together even though they know it's wrong, even if they know they're going to get hurt," is just an amazing description of falling in love.

I hope we get more soon!