| Reviews for And He Pleaded |
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   schaapje424 chapter 15 . 5/2/2019 Hey! I know you already finished this story, but I still wanted to review it. I love the story and your fantasy. Totally didn't see the stuff with halt killing himself coming. Also, I think you wrote very well about will and his character is pretty good developed, something I always struggle with. I have just one thing to make your future writings better: I would like to read more about the surroundings and stuff. You know the ancient writing mantra show don't tell? I think you tell a little bit too much. If you just ask yourself what Will/Gilan sees or hears or smells and write that down, the quality of your writing would improve so much. Very nice story! Loved to read it. Another 10 minutes well spent . Schaapje424 |
| Puppykitty chapter 15 . 10/1/2017 Nice story |
| WillTreaty532 chapter 16 . 7/28/2017 Hi, these stories are amazing! Please make more of these! |
| Ranger-Corpses chapter 15 . 12/17/2016 I'm happy, because it's over (I think) but sad because it's over (I think). I love finishing books, or in this case, fanfictions, but I always get so sad when it's done. |
| Ranger-Corpses chapter 14 . 12/17/2016 Lol, I love that! I'm so using that on my friends, misplaced arrow! XD |
| WisperRanger26 chapter 13 . 12/11/2016 I loved it! Also I LOVE how the title fits into that last sentence, pure perfection thingy do you know what I mean I hope XD |
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/10/2016 Love it . I hope that Halt would not do something stupid |
| Ranger-Corpses chapter 12 . 12/9/2016 I hope we learn more in future chapters! What is this...j thing that I can't spell? Who is McKenzie who's name I probably misspelled? Will Will (he he, see what I did there?) get over his breakdowns and/or find Halt alive? How will the resent be changed? So many questions, so little time! Well, who needs time when you can time travel? XD Anyways, I hope to see more information in the j thing and McKenzie, like is the j thing a power that you take to die? Is it self inflicted? Or is it something unavoidable? What is it even? XD Anyways, I like the plot and such! |
| callum chapter 1 . 10/24/2016 booo hooo |
| WisperRanger26 chapter 1 . 10/23/2016 Once I got past the mind control thing and the huge laughter-attack I got really sad. 'Halt was being mind controlled!' *Laughs uncontrollably* *Reads on after getting under control* *Cries* Ya, that's about what happened. |
| Cassie2k chapter 11 . 9/9/2016 Sweet. :D |
| Wild Horse Annie chapter 9 . 9/8/2016 Finishhhhhhhhhhhh or I will come after you with my saxe knife! |
| Mood-Owl chapter 10 . 9/8/2016 time travel awsome |
| Cassie2k chapter 5 . 9/8/2016 ? |
| Mood-Owl chapter 7 . 9/8/2016 me: sneaking up behind u you: not noticing me: graving you and shaking you while saying "WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO HALT"! you:ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh |
