Loved it

Very well written. You captured the dialogue perfectly

This is beautiful! You write Eska and Desna so wonderfully. I love how doom-and-gloomy they are, and yet this fic is still a romantic comedy. I love so many lines in this fic, it's hard to pinpoint a favorite. But i do really like the bit where Mako offers to get out of the way. Should have known it wouldn't be so easy!

Great story, and awesome HP reference at the end :)