finally I could read this chapter, more than a month since the last one T_T and I really missed this. The last month has being crazy in all kinds ways, college stuff almost took my whole time and energy (there was so much papers to read and finals to do... I really thought that I would die for a moment.)

Anyway,about the chapter... i loved this, or better, I really needed this. Honestly this was a roller coaster, Kumiko and Reina are so cute, cheesy and adorables that really makes me be all "oh gosh, stop being so cute you two", but there's some lines that really hit me so bad that I had to stop reading and just staring at the ceiling. I indentify myself with Kumiko at the level that sometimes just makes hard to read, y'know? I see myself in her and there's times that basically gets too personal. And it's amazing that you can do this, that just proof how much life you put into your characters.

One of the most strong points in this fanfic is how you make the relationship and how the girls react to that, in this chapter the part when Kumiko kinda puts herself as a burden to Reina was so cute and make me fall for her even more, this kinda of considerative about the others person life is an quality too cute and charming, made me wanna hug her so much for that. I'm week for those types of thing, like when they are in the park just talking about personal stuff and enjoying another's presence. I live for moments like that XD btw, that was my favorite part.

But Natsuki was the one i missed the most, gosh I love that girl (you know it already but, still) man, that sarcastic way of hers kills me. And yeah... being cleary the second option... kinda sucks, I had beeing there too kiddo, but I am hoping that the ribbon girl fall for you and you be happy, you totally deserve this. And am I wrong or that dream scene was a memory when she and Kumiko broke up? Broke my heart see her in that way and fuck off that other girl, I mean, i know that this situations are hard but, come on! At least talk to her or write something before desapears, look at what you did to my poor girl T_T (I loved the backstory, tho)

And the last scene in the fancy dinner (I love these first fancy dinner scenes is like "wow, this is really becoming something serious" thing) with the cat thing i was totally expecting something bad but, the end was so good and I am with Reina's friend about the roofs, there's few places better for this kinda thing.

Anyway, really loving this fanfic and I so glad that things are good for now and I can go back to read my fanfics

Wow, I loved this SO much, I mean, in some parts I was literally rolling in the bed screaming "how cute!" internally. Soft Reina just kills me, I love Kumiko she is so cute (the highfive which a teddy bear make me smile so wide, I love this little details) but Reina is just... Wow, known what I mean?

About Natsuki, i really love how you did her, i can relate with her so much, as a friend with someone who is in love, she is sometimes a pain in the ass, but she clearly loves Kumiko and care about her so much because she doesn't want that Kumiko end up like her, she is in the end a really romantic person, but love failed wich her just to many times that she found herself in disbeliv. I may be reading too much in this, but the way she is always saing that Reina will broke Kumiko's heart, and qestioning if Kumiko will find happiness in this love, is like she is waiting the world give a signal that she is wrong, i kinda was in that bad place myself, i usually did that too.

I wasn't expected that midori of all people will notice that LOL, (btw, that kids part was funny, I totally can see that happening). I am sad about Kazuki, that little piece of shit called Suichi deserves a good punch in the face, at last.

The dreamy Kumiko is so cute to see her floating thinking in the kiss, and yeah, in that situation be overthinking about all is the standart, is really something to drove someone crazy, espeially wich Reina doesn't showing up or texting her back. Btw, in the moment that Reina's show up, i was so into the moment wich Kumiko describing the kiss that my heart skipped a bit in surprise, if was me i would totally hide myself.

Now the most important part... I just love how Reina just answered the kumiko's question with such a passionate a kiss and saying that she was thinking that has being a dream, this was really sweet. When they are walking holding hand so pridfull despite the stares is really meaningfull.

the scene in the dinner was great, i really love those talks about taking it easy and figuring out what they are to each other and what is this realationship, i admit that i am really weak to those things (btw, fuck off those dinner's people, that makes me mad). I loved the conversation in a whole, especially how kumiko is insecurit about her little experience. And that line about Reina missed the kiss... how cute you can be Kumiko?

Sorry about this really big comment, but I really missed this adorkable mess that is Kumiko, this really make my day, was such a stressfull week, filled up wich college stuff, just now they give me a break, and this make me fell so much better, so thanks for this chapter.

Wow, totally worth waiting to be in a good mood to read this. I was so hyped for this chapter and you delivered, and how you delivered, i loved it! My favorite chapter so far, and isn't just because of my so expected KumiRei's first kiss (that i wasn't expect to be in this chapter, honest. Such a great surprise).

by the way, fuck Shuichi, damm that annoying prick, i really feel bad about Hazuki in general, but he in this fanfic is such a asshole, i want to punch him in the face.

Anyhow, i love Natsuki so much, she is just the best, her personality and actions are so good, i can't have enough strait jokes from her (especilly the "small/tall hetero" this killed me LOL).

And my little girl Yuuko finaly show up, i literaly raised my fist and cheered i little when she and Natsuki interacted eachother. I already liked their dynamic, btw. And that thing I almost let pass by, but make me so happy: when Natsuki confide whith to Yuuko despite that she consider her a strange, and latter in the chapter Kumiko comment to Reina that Natsuki sometimes confide with girls she 'feels something'. I am already creathing expectatives for this ship \o/

I really liked how you mixed parts of the show in this chapter, especilly the mountain hike part. All the little things betwen Kumiko and Reina, the holding hands, the gazes, was so cute, and the last part, closing the chapter wich such sweet kiss was the best, i love this scene.

(Oh, I totally forgot to send this review, it's interesting that the site saved what I wrote in the time somehow, its good that still is my first impression, anyways...)

I already like this fic, the theme already gets my attention, I don't know why but coffeeshops have such a simple yet romantic atmosphere.I really like the Kumiko you make, she is so funny and a cute mess. The friendship between Natsuki and Kumiko always makes the stories more interesting and fun, especially when Natsuki helps / tease Kumiko because of Reina, speaking in this little beauty devil, I liked how you make her all misteryous beeing the "umbrella girl". Anyway, great start, looking forward to the development of this story.

Yes, Yes! everyone cries. Man, Madoka broke me so hard wen I watched for the first time, still is one of my favorites series, I have the novel and the mangas, including the spin-off ones, MadoHomu e Kyousaya is OTP, especially after the movie.

Anyway, about the chapter, the Kumiko's panic reactionsi always make me giggle and laugh, she is just to adorable and every time that I read this fanfic and see Kumiko acting like that I remember in the show when she call Reina's name and then she just run alway. Too bad that seems Natsuki couldn't get the job and now she will have kto be a third weel, hoping that in the festival she just found a certain someone. (By the way, I am already in the midlle of the story T_T, it's kinda sad)

i laugh hard in this chapter, but also ended feel bad because of Natsuki, man... She seems so "broken" with all that bad dates, heartbrokens and other stuff. More then seeing the adorable Kumiko "Big Mess Lesbian Lizard" Oumae end up with Reina "Too intense and philosofical for that late at night" Kousaka, I want to see Natsuki finally being with the girl that she deserves. (That part of Lesbian Lizard make me laugh so hard because that make me remember of Illia from RWBY)

Was a surprise to know that she and Kumiko has tried one time, glad that in the end work out fine betwen them and it's nice to see Natsuki's sisterly side toward Kumiko, is really interesting how the relationship between then works. Anyway, Kumiko is becoming a mess even more with every chapter, is so funny and this is giving me life LOL, loving her even more.

Come on Kumiko, it's not your fault that you fall in love with Reina, I mean, who doesn't?

Anyway, she is becoming more and more an adorable "Gay Mess" and i love it. The way she can't stop herself and end up talking and typing more than necessary wen she is talking with Reina is just so cute.

Natsuki is so cool, i really like the way you make her, she really care about Kumiko and dont wanna that Kumiko make the same mistakes that she has made, so the balance betwen the pessimistc way and making Kumiko step forward whith the "umbrella girl" is interesring. speaking of Natsuki, this girl that Kumiko mentioned is Yuuko? Please, let be Yuuko LOL, if was her I will be so happy.

Anyway, really enjoying this fanfic, i saw that you have a bunch of other works in this fandom and I will check all of them wen i finished this, i really like the way you writte those adorable dorks. (By the way, i cant writte in english, so i am using the translator... dont mind whith the horrible way I writte, its bad but is from the heart :v)

Kumiko being a gay disaster is so fun and so cute, is adorable how she don't know what to do wen Reina is around. It's really fun how you can make the "Kumiko's noise" even in the writing. Loving this fanfic so far.

A wild Asuka appears LOL. The Gay Queen fooling around with girls and breaking their hearts, too bad that Natsuki was one of them, hoping that Yuuko show up for her, I ship them almost as hard I ship Kumirei, the cat and dog realationship of them is so fun. Reina seems to be looking for Kumiko and even leave whitout buy anything... strange indeed. Kumiko in love/crushing hard is so cute. Anyway, good chapter.

I love how adorable disaster this Kumiko is, the way she reacts to almost every little thing that involves Reina and don't know what to do, is so cute. I am kinda bad for Natsuki (and for Hazuki too, by the way). Really enjoying this so far.

it safe to say that kumiko is my long lost twin, happy birthday to us!

i wonder why did kumiko always write things on her notebook

By this point I want to punch the daylight's out of Natsuki. Doesn't matter I went for her in DDLC or the fact that I'm cynical person myself. Honestly I've never seen more hypocritical person. Sheesh I feel like dying right about now.

Kumiko's character here is so good. Your writing style makes me enough to visualize the story. What's gaydar? Easy ohh, I get it. It's written in here. He he gaydar

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