I just love your creative story it puts a smile on my face. I look forward to more in the future.

I feel a deja vu

Good chapter

Can I say I just spent an hour and a half (probably more) reading this whole story.

My goodness.

This story...I...I really don't know what to say...or HOW to say it.

For starters, it has a lot of great tension and suspense at the right moments. Same goes for the humorous and sad moments. Let's just say that so far, emotions are very well paced and well timed :)

A lot of creativity and originality, too. Making Mike Schmidt an old man? Always gets me grinning and chuckling. (Were you inspired by that one tumblr comic featuring old man Mike? If so, then you've done a perfect job shaping the role xD)

I love how each character has their own unique personality, like Mike's (or should I said Mr Schmidt?): Chica's a likeable tomboy. Freddy's quiet but thoughtful, patient, and somewhat quickwitted. Bonnie's attitude coupled with his accent is a strangely entertaining mix. Foxy epitomizes the metaphor of "fights like a lion, has the heart of a cowardly kitten"; i.e., he's brave coward, if that makes sense. Fredbear's gentleness and shyness despite what he's been through makes him a definitely flawed character, but in the good way. And finally good ol' Jeremy Fitzgerald: his ambivalence towards the animatronics as well as his secretive sympathy and sarcastic attitude shapes him up to be one of my favorite characters thus far.

And as far as Grace's character goes, she's just as likeable. Decently flawed with her arm disability, as well as her relatable and helpful personality deem her okay in my book (just so you know, I'm not always fond of OCs, but I've made an exception for Grace) :D

The plot is good too; nothing too cliche or overdone to be upset about. It has many twists and turns that have kept me on edge thus far. But for me the incredible personalities you've given all of the characters sprinkled with everything else on top is what completes it :3

Stupendous work! I hope to see more in the near future, but remember not to rush or push yourself too much. I can personally guarantee that this story has and will bring me lots of joy from now on. Salutations, and happy typing! :D

The suspence!

Hey hey, good to see another chapter!
I dunno if I have said before, but this is such a great story. Everyone's so interesting and distinct. And the narrative is exciting! Keep this up!
Keep writing and God bless!
Shippings

I NEED MOAR ADORABLE OLD MAN GUARD STORY!

This was a wonderful chapter, as per the norm! Beautifully sad :C
Keep writing and God bless!
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Great chapter—it's so sad seeing Mike actually acting tired. Also, I'm excited to meet Fredbear!
Keep writing and God bless,
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Foxy here for your bath?

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NO BATHS!

and Mr Schmidt doesn't question being called a murderer. xD

Lol nice. I'm loving this story. Mike is throwing everyone off their game. It's perfect.

Lmfao Foxy getting a bath is hilarious! I love the fact that they come in here to kill him and Mike just throws them off their game. I wonder how he'll fare against Freddy.

Haha just like a little kid. Poor foxy... I love it!

I love Mike in this. I love the idea of his being an older guy! This is so to read!
Keep writing and God bless,
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