This needs at least one more chapter! Love it!

Your portrayal of Solo and Illya was amazing! This was totally a great start, but it really feels like you could continue with this. :)

Oh. My. Gosh. THIS IS FREAKING AWESOME! I loved the "dark" turn this took at the end! I like how you portrayed Solo (flawless!) and his soldier history, and of course I loved the slight hints at bromance that are wound up in all of their issues of being former enemies and Illya's bluntness... In short, I love this, and I really hope you write more! (Plus Solo whump is awesome :D )

Awesome!

Please, please, please write more for this fandom! This is a wonderful fic! :)

Excellent story.

Aww I ship them :3

Wonderful, simply marvelous! I love how you wrote and described both Illya and Napoleon's characters, and captured their individual personalities perfectly... Well-done.

A thought came into my mind when I read the quote from Napoleon in response to him being a soldier, "Stop pretending that you care because...I can take care of myself." First, wow, what a strong statement. That must've caused internal conflict in feelings in Illya. And second, Napoleon might be strong, and he might be really independent and smart and everything, and he might be a survivor of war, but that doesn't necessarily mean that he can take completely full care of himself... Maybe Illya can show him that? Because Illya is a man, in my opinion, who knows the hardships of war as well... I dunno, it was just a thought! :)

I loved your writing, and I can't wait to read more! Take care, and have a lovely day today! :)

Oh no! Illya is awesome, him worrying about Solo in his way was sweet. Can't wait for more, I'm lovin the bromance.

Wonderful story! I can definitely see this as an alternate scene! Very beautifully written! :D