Fantastic story and characters! I love it! On to the next installment! :D

You are one nasty motherfucker. That is some revolting magic.

Poor Voldemort, needing a vacation.

Always though that the promise was not involving a meeting with a white mage.

... Oops indeed !
Sooo, who in the canon Buckley Cooper had a grudge with ? Was it really his brother, or rather his brother-in-law ? And how do you explain it make sense for him to want this supposed brother's children to be turn into blood-sucking ferret ? Considering the family is supposed to be aligned with Light, using the Old Ways or at least being aware of them.

About the previous chapter:
Mmmmm ... Didn't you said that the white wizard was able to use lightning as his own magic ? Is the fact that he can't redirect the killing curse when it has a lighting property link to the nature of it being an unforgivable spell ? Or that inherently it is not lightning even if modified to behave like one ?

[Sorry for the former useless start of a review on the previous chapter, little mistake on my side]

Mmmmm ... Didn't you said

Ooookay ... You depicted Malefoy as a not so smart and bad actor the few time he did appear previously. So, while his pitch isn't really the most attractive, it doesn't seem to make much sense how he is trying to take initiative and be smart. Hell, he didn't even show the stress or worries that burden him daily like it was the case when Tracey noticed his seemingly odd behavior. In the canon, if I remember right, when he had this plan about getting a way-in inside Hogwarts and find a way to get rid of Dumby Albus, his failure would have led to his death.

Tom not being there at that time mean their big boss won't threaten him. And while Bella may very well say that he will suffer pain worse than death should he fail, I don't think Lucius would be willing to kill his son if it isn't to immediately please his sneaky boss.

Why do I feel Tom's threat of torturing Bella should she make a blunder look more like a reward than anything for the crazy psychotic sadistic witch that she is pictured as ? My mind can't help but add the "borderline suicidal masochist" tag to her personality... under the condition that Tom is the one taking care of her of course.

Jen's life is certainly not easy, with all those things going around her. DE, The Order of the chicken, Dora, Luna and her family ... but Danny's life certainly wont be easy now too.

This story is absolutely great. The only horrible thing about it is that everything is being choked because of Luna. Luna and Jen aren't compatible no matter what. They're too different and it's annoying that nearly every decision Jen has Luna as a part of it. You would think that Jen would use her brain instead of her heart, because how else did she live the majority of her life?

It's too late anyway as the series is already accomplished. I'm struggling to even continue reading because of this "relationship" that's so important to Jen.

If only. Good job author for everything else though.

Jen really needs a better weapon. A staff or even start using that sword.

Wait... is she not going to take any valuables still in the castle with her?! C'mon man!

Aww... I wish she had given it to flitwick. Please break up jen and luna. They are really not compatible with each other! They are completely different kinds of people with very different opinions. Please break it up soon.

...oh shit... I knew it as soon as you said the name. How could she forget that! She even remembered that the protections were from holda! Damn it... atleast now can you break off the jen x luna pairing?