Reviews for Naruto: Catalyst of the Supernatural
blazes207 chapter 4 . 10/3
Loving your story
Can't wait for next chapter it really interesting.
He i want in Harem Grayfia, Gabriel, female sirzech, Kuroka, Tsukiko
Mikoto that all I could think atm.
thank you
ChangeMe4574 chapter 4 . 5/31
This is shaping up to be such a good story. Please update.
huongdaoroma chapter 4 . 2/11
Good. Updates would be nice, but considering how long it's been... unlikely XD
Parapraxis A51 chapter 4 . 10/30/2019
This is definitely different from the rest. Love how u keep us guessing.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/22/2019
please continue the story. its awesome
Stagking2012 chapter 2 . 2/28/2019
i love a good OC and everything the only thing i do hate more then anything though are self inserts
Jessica9906 chapter 4 . 1/13/2019
Well, but when does Mei appear in the story?
When will we continue?
Naruto will be in the meadow of Rias or Sona? (preference for Rias)
SantoryuSekai chapter 3 . 11/10/2018
droped!
Monster King chapter 4 . 8/9/2018
Great story please continue it soon.
Burning Moonlight chapter 4 . 4/17/2018
This is a pretty good writing style .I like the story progression. It doesn't get dull.
General Kain of Whirlpools chapter 3 . 3/27/2018
I fucking hated that scene of Sona.
kynan99 chapter 1 . 1/26/2018
Thanks
Guest chapter 4 . 10/20/2017
Please update this isn't a flaming dumpster like so many others I've seen
david.teague.3950 chapter 2 . 10/21/2017
So Naruto somehow turned the teacher he's attracted to into a Succubus don't know what to say about that.
Molten Thunder chapter 3 . 9/7/2017
You've got a number of spelling mistakes this chapter (and earlier chapters like having "insurance" instead of "endurance" when he first reached the clearing). I would suggest either getting a Beta reader or doing an extra out-loud proofreading to catch these errors.

As for the story, it seems interesting though I have no idea where it is headed and Naruto's strength is inconsistent. Why was he able to heal in minutes from the botched rasengan while it took all night to heal from punching some trees?
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