| Reviews for The Goodnight Kiss |
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siera2325 chapter 20 . 9/9/2018 wow this is interesting... cant wait to see where it goes... i like jackie and Eric together... but hate the thought of a donna hyde marriage... yuck ... hope you update soon. |
NightFurball chapter 20 . 8/28/2018 I thought this was amazing. I don't know when you will update but the latest chapter could have also felt like an it's just me. |
W chapter 20 . 7/18/2018 I reread from the beginning to reacquaint with the story. I really enjoy it and glad you updated. Thanks |
Truman B chapter 20 . 7/10/2018 Great chapter! I love the flash forward and that Jackie's pregnant! Can't wait to see what more you come up with! |
AmbientSpaceNoise chapter 20 . 7/10/2018 Regardless of it's length, I still enjoyed the chapter despite how sad it is that they aren't the couple we saw earlier in the story, but given how much of a train wreck that part was, it would make sense for them to have some scars from it lol I love how realistic the story is, it brings a lot of substance to the atmosphere of the whole story, not to mention really heavy hitting drama. I find myself pretty excited for the marriage character, so Eric and Jackie (and us) can find out what's wrong. I also really like how upfront Eric is with Jackie about them seeing a counselor about their state, shows how much he doesn't want to lose her. It's so sweet and endearing, classic Eric! For sure, the most intense and nerve racking part will be when the reunion comes along, I just want these two to come out on top at the end of it all, they deserve it. Sucks the next update is so far away but I'm one to talk about that kind of thing ;-) Again, great job with executing the drama and characters, you are a GOD lol Keep calm and take your time with this one! I know you'll nail it :-) |
Goldenbassets chapter 8 . 2/9/2018 Omg I can't get over Kelso kissing her with a lizard in his mouth. That seems so Kelso. |
Goldenbassets chapter 7 . 2/9/2018 The beginning paragraphs where Eric and Jackie are fighting off the illicit feelings are so poignant and stirring that I can't help but reread them over and over. So well written. And darling Fez, wiser than he seems. Hyde, makes me so nervous. |
Goldenbassets chapter 18 . 1/26/2018 How miserably awkward, to try and build a new relationship when you feel you've fractured your friend group by finding love. Ruining home base for the whole group, but should that mean denying yourself love? Oh Jackie! An alcoholic! Eric, what do we do now?! |
Goldenbassets chapter 17 . 1/26/2018 Oh Fez, always providing some comedic relief. Sleeping on the floor like a cat. Too funny. I love that Eric made her a flower with the money. Something beautiful out of something that hurt her. And the mini Luke was very sweet. So was the goodnight kiss. Finally! |
Goldenbassets chapter 2 . 1/25/2018 Really Eric, it's a rat, no it's a basketball! Terrible liar! Oh ouch Kelso. That's a rough night. First the wrench then the ol' shove off from Jackie. Donna's getting suspicious. Eric and Jackie are acting shady as hell. I love how this ties into the other one shot The Girl Who Got It(?) Jackie thinking about her little fantasies with Eric in her morning mirror time. I'd love to see more of that. |
Goldenbassets chapter 1 . 1/25/2018 Oh so painfully awkward at the end there! Eric's thoughts are beautiful and I can't get enough of them. I love Eric and Jackie together usually as an older couple but I'm intrigued by this set up. This Sleeping Beauty thing going on is so interesting! |
4Eva Knight chapter 7 . 12/16/2017 Great chapter. |
4Eva Knight chapter 6 . 12/16/2017 Cool chapter. |
4Eva Knight chapter 5 . 12/16/2017 Hell yeah. Nice chapter. |
4Eva Knight chapter 4 . 12/16/2017 Awesome chapter. |