Brilliant!

so hot, so angsty, so goddamn good

Great.

Thank you. That's all I have to say. Thank you!

This is a sweet tale. I'm kind of a sucker for these, "we fell in love and didn't even realize it" stories. I really liked their friends with benefits relationship, too, being there for each other for quite a long time before it got weird.

This was a great story. Love how it took on the When Harry Met Sally type storyline!

Amazing. Love her question at the end. And of course his answer.

Amazing! :)

thank you for this! You're an amazing writer, hope to read more stories from you :)

Hehe... Thanks :-)

I love the turn of phrase at the end!

Awesome :-) nicely done... Very angsty, very captain swan. Maybe can we have some outtakes?

I love their friendship and knew it was more and waited and read and enjoyed. Killian knew he loved her and took the risk of telling her. She reacted as expected, mad because he changed the rules. But she came back to him and it was lovely. I liked the progress of time as they lived their lives, dated, worked, found time for each other as friends and companions. I liked recognizing the characters, hipster monkey face Walsh, good guy Graham, free and casual Tink. Their personalities fit nicely. But Emma and Killian, best friends, true love, soon to be married. Thanks for writing.

What a lovely ride! Awesome story!

One of the best one-shot I have ever read, amazing and so well written! Thank you for sharing it! It's really beautiful :)