i wanna put a snake in my asshole. :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Counter argument for AN "not knowing about the body double" - in the hospital, she says something along the lines of "the patient on the bed next to the target saw my face"

That opening from DD's POV was a terrific piece of writing. Fantastic.

Excellent writing. Like really, really good. Just the right amount of detail and moves along at a good pace. Great work.

Nooooooo. This story was so good.

Please for the love of god continue this if you can. It is literally better than the game almost as if a squeal or DLC. I love this as much as I love the game even more.

Have to say, I've read a few FanFictions about Quiet since this game has come out, and yours is the best by far. Great language usage and structure, and besides some possible noun/pronoun changes and grammar, it's great! Whenever you update, I'll be happy to read.

Sincerely,
Someone Who Loves This Game and Character

I hope you continue this story!

For the love of the Lord
Please update
I'm still playing this game
This story Is so good
I can totally see it happening
I still can't separate myself from the characters
Please continue
- a MGS fan

After reading all 6 chapters in one go, I am enthralled. When you update I am sure that I will enjoy reading it.

I LOVE this writing! It's so nearly perfect, I couldn't help but keep my eyes off the pages. Kep it up!

3rd time reading it please update !

this is good

Nice work here. You're pretty good. Warframe huh? MR17 myself, u play often? Im game

Good work. Continue, please