Wow. This is gorgeous. You write in a way that makes it feel like the show, with all of the confusion and jumping from one thought to another that Elliot often experiences. It's perfect and flawlessly resembles Elliot's narration, but with a difference that makes it beautiful to read. I love how you reference the familiarity Elliot has with Tyrell, even though he's unaware of it himself for the most part, and the incorporation of the time loss is so seamless. Ahhh, this is just so gorgeous. I know you published this a while ago, but I still felt compelled to comment.

No no no! I want mor!
Damn it! It's was so cool and interesting, I would've wanted morrreeee! :)

So good!

I love it!

You seriously have a talent for writing! this was amazing and scarily realistic. elliot's narrations sound totally legit and it was just the write amount of detail. :)

Wooh~ I do love this pairing. A wonderful story you have written here, thanks!

Can't... Breathe... Too busy fangirling! This is perfect! A very fantasic fic you've got here, dearie! I'd absolutely love to read more!