Jeff may be a pig but he’s a good man at heart and I love him with all my being

Aghhhh I’m such a hoe for domesticity

They’re getting softer by the chapter and I’m here for it

. . . That was hot. No, like really, I didn’t think I was bi but I just might be bc the thought of this bitch smashing another bitch over the head with a bottle and threatening to beat the shit out of her again if her mans (but not her mans but he rlly is her mans) so much as TRIED to help her got me going HOLY FUCK THAT WAS HOT MAKE HER DO IT AGAIN

You really had me for a second there thinking it was word porn time fr and getting hit with the “it was all a dream~~” I mean the word porn was great but my inner plot lover was sad

I’m really loving this story! I love Nayla and Law totally became my favorite once I saw him in Punk Hazard! And then I’m Dressrosa oh my lord that whole arc gave me so many emotions! I’m really looking forward to Nayla being involved in it somehow! Oh and the whole Kotta thing has me really feeling for him and Nayla too. I did have a feeling that’s why he didn’t like her and it’s good that now he just like her a bit more even though now he’s weary of her for a different reason.
Law realizing his feeling for her is going to be such a whirl wind, especially the closer Law gets to finalizing his plan to attack Doflamingo.

Hello! I've spent my free time the last couple weeks reading this story, and I've enjoyed every moment of it. Your writing is engaging, and your OC is so likeable. You paced out her development so well, and I loved the subplot with Kotta. He really was being a little bitch about the whole thing, but seeing her handle it the way she did before finally acknowledging him as a relatable human being did so much for Nayla's character. I also love how gradually you portray the progression of Law's attitude and feelings for Nayla. It seems natural, and some of my favorite moments have been seeing the change Law is undergoing from the perspective of his crew. I love Law and Nayla's current dynamic, and I can't wait to see how you deepen their relationship in future chapters! I know it's been a while since your last upload, but don't be discouraged by slow updates. You've created a wonderful story, and its continuation is well worth waiting for! I look forward to seeing more of Nayla and the Heart Pirates whenever you are able to update.

Stay safe! Sincerely,
Liz

Re-reading this fic gosh it's really goodddddd, I hope you're doing well and i hope you don't forget about this fic

I love this fix so much and come back to it frequently. I hope you are in good health and hope we can get an update soon if you’re ready! I’d love to see where this story goes!

I’m sure I’ve commented recently but if you see this, please could you bless us with a punk hazard chapter? I HAVE to see Zoro’s reaction to their fully formed relationship and how Law would react to them. It would be so fun to see the roles reversed from the beginning of the story and law feel protective over her for a reason he couldn’t quite explain. Haha

Anyway! Hope you’re doing alright!

Has it really been a year? I hope you've been in good health, and thank you for posting this amazing fic I can reread 1000 times

Very good chapter, i hope you update another soon!

Ok ok I admit I have only read up to Chapter 48 but...

I MUST REVIEW.

BECAUSE THIS IS A MASTERPIECE.

I have never, EVER, EVERRRRR in my entire years of writing and reading fanfic, dating back to 2001 (YES I AM THAT OLD OKAY) have I felt the need to review like, anything. Why? Because this fic has me squealing like a high school girl, I get so happy, it gives me happy feelings, I'm smiling when I read this, I mean I love reading about our Surgeon of Death, I love the interaction and seeing the gradual deepening of their relationship was really wonderful. It's so fucking deep I can't - (I just can't man).

Anyway, I cannot explain this...this MAGIC that you have created but I want to thank you so so much for gracing us with this beautiful fic. I love love looooooooove the interactions between Nayla and Law - the flirting, the bickering, the sexiness of it all. I ship them so hard.

BUT!

Honestly I have to admit that I often skim over some parts when it's to do with the crew because I'm simply not interested and it's mostly because I'm so invested in Law x Nayla. I'M SORRY BUT IT'S TRUE! Another thing is I find Nayla's constant verbal abuse that she fires at Law very, very jarring and sometimes uncalled for - there are times when I feel yeah ok lol but other times I find it unnecessary. I mean give the dude a break. I'm only at chapter 48 though and there's more than 70 so what the hey. Don't get me wrong, I really do love your writing - I have a deep fondness for this fic, even though this fic is perhaps the only fic I've read where the main character x OC are still not officially together and it's past the 40 chapter mark but it's okay and I can accept it. But please please please I wish to see more sweet moments of Law x Nayla, like pleasssse.

I'm sorry to review anonymously as a guest, but hell I never even review anything in general anymore. Anyway, thank you very much for writing this. I do hope you write more and finish this. God bless you and have a wonderful day.

I spent the past 4 days reading this during lulling periods at work.

It. Is. A. Masterpiece.

I can feel the effort and commitment it took to narrate Law and Nayla’s character development, their feelings for each other, the near misses, the sexual tension, and also the crew dynamic. I never really enjoy fics that heavily feature OC’s other than the main OC, but you changed mind. Through your awesome characterization and typical One Piece-fashion humour, some of my favourite scenes were Nayla’s interactions with Jeff and Connor. Everything flowed super naturally, especially the characters’ back stories; it felt as though Nayla could be a canon character, a complement to Law’s personality. They mesh extremely well together.

To think I was patient enough to go through 61 chapters before I found what I was originally looking for... and as a reader it felt so satisfying and fulfilling to see them reconcile their differences, and accept their own differences. I felt genuinely happy for them.

Honestly, I am happy with this story even if you aren’t able to update for a while. There are so many directions this story could go, so much potential, but I’m content knowing that Law and Nayla could share little happy moments.

Thank you for writing! Love this

Hey!

Just hopping by to reread and wanted to review! Hope everything is good in your life. Still a great read.