I love your story.
It is on the short side for a plot like this, yet it isn't lacking any important details. Also I love stories where Gordon shows his WASP skills. I've actually read it like ten times already.
Actually I love all of your stories, but I only have my account for a short amount of time yet, so I don't have time to review them all. I decided on this one, as it is one of my all time favorites.
Thank you for writing it!

Love it.

Aw this was so perfect and you wrote the characters really convincingly.I haven't watched Thunderbirds, for years don't know how/ why I ended up on its fanfic page but this was so good I had to keep reading! Will there be a sequel, a series of one shots maybe?

Good story!

The title of this story alone is enough to make my stomach knot up. The 'hurt/comfort' genre only reinforces that fact. I am super eager to see what you've put together here!

Oh no, Virgil! D: Kidnapped? Black market? Yeah... I knew there was a reason my stomach was cramped up. But I LOVE how Virgil isn't just passive about the whole thing—first he tries to reason with these morons and then he begins making sketches of their faces. Clever! I hope he gets a chance to use that information...

Wow, you've really stacked the odds against Virgil here, haven't you? John isn't on Five and now Virgil's watch has been tossed out the window? Craaaaap. But tracking devices in his tools? Okay, that's smart. It's an idea I've never seen utilized before but it makes perfect sense.

Oh no. Ooohhh no. Oh no. The Hood. Stupid petty criminals that know about the Hood... This is trouble and a half...

Woo! Big bro Scott to the rescue! I have no doubt that he'll stop at nothing to get Virgil back.
...although Virgil's making pretty good headway on that project by himself. Good for him! But my stomach's still in knots because the story's less than half finished. Something bad is going to happen...
...and something bad did happen. Ow. Poor Virgil—trauma-inflicted concussions are no fun. :(

WASP-trained Gordon to the rescue! I have a weakness for when Gordon goes all military and it looks like he's going to see some action in this story!

O.o I... wasn't expecting the Hood to be at the hanger. Ooooh dear. Virgil stood up to him, though. He may not have the military training Scott and Gordon are no doubt putting to good use, but he has more than enough spirit to stand up to the Hood.

Scott... is rather attractive when he goes all uber confident on everyone. But dang, when Virgil's threatened? Bad move, criminal dude. You've just bought yourself a world of hurt from one of the most protective elder brothers on this planet.

Whew! Rescued! And just in time, too. I have no doubt that the Hood got away, because that slippery fellow always seems to get away, but hopefully all the other guys got caught!

Oh my word, Alan's comment about five million 'not seemingly like very much.' *exasperated voice* Brothers!

The ending! It's perfect! I love how you tied together the entire oneshot in a few simple sentences—it has a lovely well-rounded feel. Once again, another brilliant, unique idea from you, and you wrote it to perfection. I loved seeing Scott and Gordon's military sides come out, and then all of them training together at the end! Virgil throwing both Gordon and Scott! Scott sleeping beside Virgil's bed... and finally the lack of nightmares. Ahhh, yes, a satisfying story, for sure! Well done! Now my brain is ticking through potential sequel scenarios...

That was really cool. Great fic, great characterisation/dialogue. A really enjoyable story, and it helps that Virg was rescued and all was okay in the end. Can't help not being amused imagining the look on The Hood's face when he learned that Virgil had disappeared.

Oh gosh - I really enjoyed this! It was tense and action packed, and I loved that we got to see that other aspect of Gordon that he keeps hidden. Nice work!

Loved it very good xxx