I'm actually speechless. This was so incredibly powerful, the way you managed to make him sound insane and how he got there and even the past chapters, dude, this was freaking AMAZING!
Did you take the name (rin) from an anime?
but all in all it's a work of art.
P.S. what was the title before?(I just read the story so i don't know)

Great! Rather confusing, but excellent.

hi u still writing this its a nice story with a ton of potential and an even better wrighter so good luck

wow this seems pretty cool

Please do not stop. This is REALLY GOOD.

Hey this seems interesting, if no one else has asked to adopt, I was wondering if I could. It sucks that you lost your muse but it is how it is, and we sadly cannot change that. Please get in touch with me when you can if you would allow me to adopt your work. Thanks.
-Illuzunist

WHAT THE FUCK, PERCY KILLED CAMP HALF BLOOD, I CANNOT BELIEVE THIS!

SADNESS SADNESS SADNESS! U R A RLLY GOOD WRITER! I CRY...:''''( SEE. '.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'.'

awww, I hope you have a good life out of writing and happy new years!

I just realized that I forgot to close the brackets. See what having your older twin sister chasing after you with a fork can do to your memory and SPAG? Well, anyway, I'm closing the brackets now. ). Bye.
- Ignotus Peverell

P.S: Do you think I should change our penname to Khione Ignotus Peverell or something?

P.P.S: Thanks for telling us that we're funny. Mum just says we're "not yet grown up", our older sister Kymopoleia says we're annoying, our older brother Antioch says we're immature and our other older brother Cadmus says he's Switzerland. Our younger siblings do not comment, though Theseus says that I'm awesome, Perseus says I'm boring, Artemis, who has a severe case of cooties, says I'm a boy, Hebe can't talk yet, and Andromeda says that it's stupid to use fictional names for family members.

Ignotus: No, we're not schizophrenic, we're twins. We share an account because Khi thinks it's a good idea. I'm Ignotus, I'm a boy, and Khione, my younger twin sister, is a girl.

Khione: Don't listen to him, I'M older.

Ignotus: If you say so.

Khione: And it's really sad that you're no longer writing fanfiction! We'd adopt your story, but both our schedules are kinda busy, so we wouldn't be able to do it justice. It's a great idea though.

Ignotus: And we'll somehow figure out how to turn the PM thing on -

Khione: So you can tell us when someone adopts it!

Ignotus: And we hope that you start writing again one day, when you have more patience.

Khione: Also, that cliffie was just EVIL! How could you do this to me? :(

Ignotus: That's her fake crying in the corner. Girls.

Khione: And then you left forever, and I'm soooo saaaad... *sniffle*

Ignotus: Go and find a tissue, moron. Sorry about her. She thinks she's being mildly funny. (You're not, sugarcube)

Khione: Shut up, Ig! You have the emotional depth of a teaspoon! Boys!

Ignotus: Hey! That's not nice!

Khione: Yes, you're right.

Ignotus: Exactly!

Khione: Yes, you should never insult the teaspoons. I think there's an actual fic about that, probably on our Favourites list. Rebellion of the Cutlery or something like that. Poor Hermione.

Ignotus: You're brain dead, Khi.

Khione: *sigh* see what I have to put up with?

Ignotus: See what I have to put up with?

Khione: Anyway... Farewell! I'll miss you! You're awesome! My hand's gone to sleep because I was sitting on it too long!

Ignotus: Khi, that's MY hand.

Khione: ...Oh. That explains why I can't feel anything when I pinch it, like this...

Ignotus: OWWW!

Khione: *shakes head* such a baby.

Ignotus: Hey!

Khione: OWWW! Ig! I can't believe you pinched me!

Ignotus: You pinched me first!

Khione: I am going to kill you!

Ignotus: I'm just going to run for my life now, so bye.

Khione: Bye.

Ignotus: (I typed that for her, cos she's too busy chasing after me... Oh, she's stubbed her toe on the doorframe. That's got to hurt... Bye.

Can change this story and actually make this all like a bad dream or something

Well thank you very muh for telling us at least, I don't have enough fingers to count in my family how many times a great author just fell off Geaa into Tartarus, so thank you for that.
I also wanted to say this story seems really creative and that even if your story gets adopted wit a whole new family!
Don't delete it.
The frat reason for this is that people like to read the original and give credit where credit is due, and I will admit I found your story from your sibling's account, I read your story up to where it was, and I don't think that I actually did anything but favorite and all that jazz. In fact I had your story in a tab on Google chrome for my laptop in case I get extra time to review it, even if I can now.
Another thing is, maybe one day you WILL want to continue this story, but at your own pace. Like just writing a chapter whenever you feel like it, or starting one an not finishing it, just letting out energy and all that. Because I know for a fact that when someone creates a plot line it takes a while for the spirit of writin to leave them. So just please keep it on your profile so if you feel like it you can write again and keep your story.
Thanks for reading my review!
NE
P.S. If you wanna rant to me I love reading rants :P

The actual fuck

Wow
Just...wow