Greetings!
It is always nice to read a Thief fanfic that is not set in the last game (which I have not liked at all, for a number of reasons that I'll not say here since this is not a game review), there are so few of them and fewer still are worth reading.
I appreciated the effort you made to keep the story realistic, as well as the sarcasm in Garrett's thoughts/narrations, it wouldn't be himself without.

I'll wait for more chapters (pretty pleeeaseeee? Are there more chapters coming yeees?) and if I may give you some advice, it will be to balance a carefull narrated and planned theft with some piece of action to keep the reader away from boredom.

I apologize for my not-too-good English, but it is not my mother tongue so please bear with me, and know that there are people out here that read and enjoy your story.

Regards,
ElusiveKite