| Reviews for A Fox in the Kitchen |
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Guest chapter 22 . 8/29/2018 Please continue this story |
Guest chapter 22 . 4/5/2017 Please continue to update on this story! The story is getting more and more exciting with each chapter. I can't wait to see what the ending is |
SpiritedObsession chapter 22 . 3/29/2017 OMGMGGGGGGG OMGOMGOMG i can't that cliffy is soooo evil i just feel so betrayed like you just pushed me off the cliff with no mercy and and and OMG PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASE THIS STORY IS SO NICEEEEE AND I LOVE ALL THE ZOSAN CUDDLES AND I JUST PLEASE DON'T STOP WRITING THIS BEAUTIFUL FLUFFY ANGSTY FIC i love it so much |
Doggyband chapter 22 . 1/25/2017 I just read the entire story up until now for the first time (though probably not the last) and let me tell you, it has been a very long time since I last found a story that captured me as thoroughly as this one did. (Especially that last cliffhanger, that was evil T-T) I hope your muse stays well and active for this one, I really want to see how it ends. Both the way you write and the plot is absolutely captivating and almost impossible to put away. ~from a friendly (albeit new) little fan~ |
bakeum44 chapter 22 . 1/15/2017 Please please please updateee! Im dying from your cliff hangers! |
Guest chapter 22 . 1/11/2017 Welcome back! Also, what a cliffhanger! WOW! Can't wait for more. _ |
AruRmz chapter 22 . 1/10/2017 God, that cliffhanger! nice reading you again |
X.summergrey.X chapter 22 . 1/9/2017 So much going on and some information but i feel there is more maybe on this. AND THE CLIFFHANGER! WILL THEY MAKE IT! WILL SANJI DIE OR BE SAVED FOR NOW! Cant wait for more. |
Pajamaz chapter 21 . 9/26/2016 That's for the update! Can't wait to see, what kind of shenanigans, Z & S get in |
X.summergrey.X chapter 21 . 9/26/2016 wonder what they will find on this island. hope its some answers. |
Guest chapter 20 . 9/9/2016 Thanks for the update! Can't wait to see the next challenge for these 3. |
irishgrlnextdoor chapter 20 . 9/4/2016 loved this chapter, the fluff wasn't overly fluffy *no pun intended sanji* and the sex scene was steamy. Sanji's reactions to it were totally believe able for his character. Can't wait to see more. One thing to note on your writing technique: I notice that you only ever address them by their names when stating that they are doing something, ex. Zoro reached for something. Zoro picked it up. Zoro put it down. etc. Not really critiquing it as it may just be your preferred style, but it may help the flow a bit to change it up every so often, ex. zoro reached for something. The marimo picked it up. Then the swordsman put it down. Crappy example but do you know what I'm getting at? Again, it's not even necessarily a critique, just something that stood out to me. Loving everything else about ur prowess. It's definitely above average. Better than quite a few published writers out there that I have read skill-wise. |
Guest chapter 20 . 9/1/2016 Yay, a new chapter! I've been looking forward to this. Thank you for all your hard work and effort. _ |
Ashlielle chapter 20 . 8/29/2016 These two are the best xD And innocent Zorko is so adorable! :D *hands you a cookie* :D I love this story, and I can't wait until next time! :) |
Ruruka chapter 19 . 7/7/2016 Loving this! Can't wait for the next chapter. _ |