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MarioDS01 chapter 24 . 5/19 Again, interesting stuff. Curious how this will somehow play in the current situation and with the threat Joe brings. Hope we may see more updates to this story. |
MarioDS01 chapter 23 . 5/19 Wow...that changes things a lot, which puts it mildly. Never expected to see that and have an ability of backing it up. Good. God. Almighty... |
MarioDS01 chapter 22 . 5/19 Interesting to learn more of Optimus' past as Orion in the last few chapters. I guess things are starting to make sense with why Optimus is acting the way he is as a human. Good point that he might have ways to block out pain and other things while as a Transformer, but his human brain likes that. Now things seem to getting dire. |
MarioDS01 chapter 20 . 5/19 Quite a chapter there. Could not think of much to talk about in the last few. Not quite as interesting, but I guess needed. Can understand why Optimus would run away and it seems in some way June and maybe others would have to help pick him up in some way so he does not feel useless or anything... |
MarioDS01 chapter 15 . 5/19 Really like June and glad she tries her best to help Optimus sort out his past and his feelings and to end his own self destruction. She does have a point that he is more human then he believed in himself even when he was a transformer, powerful stuff. She must have a lot of experience in this. And with all this it seems to open up a true relationship between her and Optimus. |
MarioDS01 chapter 14 . 5/19 Excellent work. Not only is Optimus having trouble with dealing with current situations, but his mistakes in the distant past, which I can imagine he did why much younger, or young for a transformer/sparkling. |
MarioDS01 chapter 12 . 5/19 Guess I am not surprised Jack would not be for the plan, but personally I rather he not put himself in some living hell for 1 or more years. Can sort of understand how he is feeling... Like the author, can't believe anyone would think he/she was going to kill of Optimus/Orion, especially before attempting the plan... |
MarioDS01 chapter 7 . 5/19 Quite a couple of surprises. 1. Optimus being able to cook, perfectly and 2. The sort of strange Phone call... Yeah, I can already see that Optimus is a hard character to write for, but in his new situation, I think that will make some interesting character development. Then again seeing you make at least 24 chapters in the last 4-5 years is impressive. Look forward reading more and curious how the other transformers and friends deal with this situation... |
MarioDS01 chapter 6 . 5/19 Another great chapter. Can see why you got so many reviews and such and deserves to be read. A little surprised Optimus' thoughts and such are changing very quickly. Then again with him being a human and having some basic knowledge of them does change things. This story really grabs hold of me and makes me want to continue reading it. |
MarioDS01 chapter 5 . 5/19 Quite an effective chapter, no matter how many times/versions we seen this in media. Can see Optimus trying to do this, to protect this family sense he tries to lead and sometimes protect his own. |
MarioDS01 chapter 3 . 5/19 Good stuff so far. The description of Optimus remind me (and may others) of the voice actor who voices the character, which makes sense. Also makes sense to make him middle-aged since he is more experienced with war and such and been through a lot. Seems we finally got to the main plot of the story. Look forward reading more! |
merendinoemiliano chapter 21 . 9/15/2019 Ah, i'm always emiliano733 |
merendinoemiliano chapter 24 . 9/15/2019 Amazing job, you portrayed so well the past of Optimus, you can feel all the tense and sadness. |
Bibliophile1303 chapter 24 . 9/13/2019 Thank you so much for posting again! I’ve loved this story ️ |
Ara chapter 24 . 9/13/2019 (*Singing*) Welcome home, you've been away for far too long |