Interesting story. Apostrophe ‘s’ is NOT used to signify plurals, as has cropped up in various places in the story. You have used it correctly in the final summary paragraph in ‘Brom and Nia’s first set of twins’ denoting ‘belonging to Brom and Nia’ but incorrectly in ‘Dragons’ in the same final paragraph.
Keep writing, as you do have imagination.

You know what my theory is? That this is an altenate universe with the girl in it. Anyway loved the storie make more chapters soon plz.

Please update! ! ! ! ! !

Love it! Good job,update soon!

Great job! I really love the how the events play out!

This is a amazing,awesome, wonderful, incredible, marvelous, prodigious, stunning, unbelievable good, beautiful, breathtaking, magnificent, wondrous, awe-inspiring, formidable, impressive, grand, majestic, mind-blowing, striking and out of the ordinary (in a moving and superb way) story that I hope you update...
You might think that it is a bit early for such praises but they are sincere and I am looking greatly forward to the next chapters...