Reviews for Harry Potter and the Once and Future King
Gmagic1337 chapter 34 . 6/12
I absolutely love this story! Please update!
inuyasha16451 chapter 34 . 4/22
Omg. Please please come back and update this awesome story soon
someone2 chapter 34 . 4/6
Hii!
I know you haven't updated in a while, but i dearly hope this story is not abandoned. I remember that I started reading it a couple of years ago, and continued to read until the twenty-something chapters. However then I became more and more busy and forgout about many stories and fanfics I liked to read. With the quarantine I have been revisiting some older fanfics, and was happy to discover this had been updated further, yet also sad when i noticed the last update was a year ago. So I decided to read it from the beginning.
Honestly, this is an amazing story. Although there were some mistakes and plot-holes in the beginning, they were not such a big deal, and it was a joy to see how much your writing grew with each chapter. And it was sad that some people tried to bring down your work, because it is brilliant despite some flaws. Even the most professional writers sometimes have flaws in their books, so I hope you no longer feel discouraged by such reviews. It is their own fault if some trivial mistakes bothered them that much, since the story itself is so worth it. I adore the way you write the characters - they almost never seem OOC, and the relationships between them are beautiful. I looove that you showed depth in some characters that I've seen undermined in other fics (like Draco or even Morgana herself). I also really like that you chose for Morgana to not return as neccessarily evil (although I also never disagree if the writers decide for her to return as evil, as that is understandable too), and that she may be swayed to the side of good or neutral (which I hope will happen). Truly, I think this is one of the best written stories in Harry Potter and Merlin crossovers. It is very well developed - you make the characters grow while portraying the traits that we love in them incredibly well, I like how you have developed some relationships and made new ones, the plot itself is set in a very enjoyable pace. You know when to end a chapter with a cliffhanger to keep suspense and excitement yet also how to not overdo it. I am entirely honest when I say you are very, very talented, and thank you so much for all of the work you put into this, I cannot imagine how hard it must have been sometimes. I really hope you have not given up on this, and that you are doing alright - that life is good to you. I wish you all, all the best, you wonderful human. Stay safe in these times. Thank you again... I hope you won't abandon this, as many people (myself included) adore the work you have created.
P.S. sorry if there are some mistakes, English is not my native language and I am only a teen myself.
cshen.julienne chapter 34 . 3/19
OH MY GOSH, were they together? Is Harry a child of? OMG I LOVE IT!
cshen.julienne chapter 27 . 3/19
I love that they have so much in common :)
cshen.julienne chapter 26 . 3/19
I love it that the all powerful warlock has forgotten a simple muffliato haha XD Loving it
cshen.julienne chapter 16 . 3/19
Oh gosh I love this! Draco Harry friendship moment :)
cshen.julienne chapter 8 . 3/19
First time I saw Harry stand up to a teacher with nothing but good sense! Really brilliant :)
cshen.julienne chapter 7 . 3/19
Really good :)
cshen.julienne chapter 5 . 3/19
This is really good. But i have to ask, why does a lot of what's happening seem to be patterned after 'Not What You Seem' by LightStruck? I'm not sure which one of you posted first but is quite alarming for a fellow writer.
wolfawaken chapter 34 . 2/1
I like this story and I know that life need to be live. So no matter what I will read each chapter that comes a year from now or even if it sooner. So get good grades enjoy new friends for you can make life times friends in college. Oh by the way love the comparison between Trump and Umbridge! Vote please!
Yaw6113 chapter 34 . 12/26/2019
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2019
I love this plz update soon
Mark chapter 25 . 10/3/2019
Your remark about the use of 'America' seems to me (a Canadian) spot on. I cannot think of a time that I would use 'America' to mean anything other than the United States and I would be offended to be called 'American'. Not because of any animosity, simply that I am not that, but a Canadian—and proud of it, as I think you should be of your nationality. As long as we maintain our common sense, there is a legitimate place for loving and being proud of our home. Mind you, I would not take public figures as a standard for English language (or much else); Calvin Coolidge said 'normalcy' and it has now entered standard American while most of the rest of us continue to say 'normality'. Some readers of fanfiction are nit-pickers. They need to learn to let go of the little points. I shudder at the grammar and spelling; but I'm not expecting Chesterton or Tolkien.
HayAce chapter 3 . 9/4/2019
I just read that there are no pairings and literally shouted with joy and am now getting weird looks.
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