JESUS CHRIST!

Very well written and dark material, practically made my skin crawl the whole time. Great job, Zehntacles.

Ok well written..but coukd ypu write something,in the same well detsiked style,about a sexy tofffee having a seductive and pleasure time with any svstfof lady? I dont see tooffe as a rapist and thats was odd

wait, what happened? Will you ever continue?
IS GOD REAL? WHO AM I?

I was literally clenching my fist the entire time. I wanted him to suffer.

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What can I say to this, really? It's really fitting I read this right after Halloween ended. The way you write everything is... Damn. It's masterful writing, the same quality you've shown over and over with 'Princess Charms'.

What happened to Star was downright horrifying and I felt scared. I STILL feel scared after reading it, more so with the implication at the very end. Keep doing the amazing job you do on stories and this is a good story for Halloween or anyone in the mood for messed up horror.

Easily one of the best stories of this community! Well Written, Horrifyingly detailed, and Character personalities written to a T! What more can you want from a fanfic!

i cried, how can someone write something so horrible?

I guess the only way for star to know for sure is if she found some bruising or she get pregnant by toffee after he raped her

Brilliant

Woah, just, woah...
The graphic description of each event was brilliant, you're an incredible writer. Creepy Toffee, well-written.. Just wow, rather scarred now but that was a great story

you should continue the story.

I actually cried near the ending paragraphs. That was brilliant.

Holy Toffee a fucking creep

i like dark things but this went way over the edge... I LOVED IT! not the whole Rape thing but the slight horror... i'm kinda into that kinda thing...a lot.