is that 'something' death?

LOL
Funny to think that this fic may canon.

I liked it, but it could be done a lot better...

I really, REALLY enjoy this concept, and I loved the story, but some of the vocabulary choices could be more diverse. I can also see places where the characterisation could be improved. Keep up the good work, and I hope my advice helps you improve.

awww ;.; I loved this story It was so darn cute.

Boom

That was my mind exploding. Boom.

Please make more PLEASE

I do hope to see this get updates.

whens the next part?

Wow, great original idea. I wonder how Sylvia will take it once the shock wears off.

I freaking love this! Having Wander be this little guy, all cheerful and having fun, yet he's very old! No wonder he keeps exploring; the uniclverse is always changing, so he end up going in spirals and circles, and finds and learns new things!

Brilliant! You have got me well and truly hooked! I can't wait for more b-rilliance! Keep it up and Happy Story Weaving!

Liliana Dragonshard

Pfft. Always like Wander to leave everyone out of the loop

So cool , please continue