Oh... ohh...!

I didn't expect the ending to be like that.

it was... great... deep...

Oh my, this had been too short. How I wish it had gone longer! (Well done~)

Incredibly sweet. I loved the natural flow of this story- it carried on so smoothly and I didn't think it was ooc at all; you've captured Ritsu's internality with the right amount of wit and emotion. I'm starting to wish that the actual series would give Ritsu an ultimatum just like how your Takano put it on the table, but all in due time... Keep up the great work!

wow...

Ahahahah, I loved this. It made my eyes watery. Good job!