nOT OKAY MAN

I liked this. It's a very creative very new perspective

Oh boy
Just wait 'til Demo sees Sniper after the fifth comic
I bet someone's thinking the exact same thing and I haven't seen it yet
I'm sad now. I guess you could say I'm pretty BLU-
no

u did gr8 m8 i r8 8/8

TTTT_TTTT

*gasps for breath*oh God...oh God... I'm CRYING SO HARD

*sobs* why do i always read the sad stories! DX
This is so sad but so well writen... Oh gosh..,

Oh my God... tearing up here :(

Quite interesting to see Sniper in a story without Spy as the co-protagonist. Also, since the story in the comics continued, I would love to see how you write Demoman's reaction to Sniper coming back to live like a...well, is not pretty, but I won't say anything just in case someone didn't read the comic, but I'm sure Demoman will have a heck of a reaction with how Sniper is now.
And I would love to see it from your point of view.

This is so beautifully written, I love it.
The thought of all of this happening didn't even occur to me at the time I was reading the comic. You gave me a different look on this and I thank you for that.
*applause* keep writing!

okay...

Well, shit, that hurt. Oh, this is a really great headcanon - I can see Sniper doing this. Bless his soul, Demo is a true friend.

Really love how good the grammar is in this one (absolutely NO sarcasm intended). Looking at the story (and the presence of a picture actually related to it), I can see you actually put effort into it. Good job.

I love how you continued on from the comic! Although, when ya know what happends afterwords, it does make ya feel better about it. Very touching. The story was great, and very descriptive! Great job!

great job man, my feels were rekt

I'm crying now, like really crying now

I... I... *dies* I don't even know what to say, it just hurt the feels... Very well written, friend!