Thank you for making this fantastic story.

Why is it that the stories with the best Arkos scenes are the ones that DON'T end up shipping Arkos?

WHY IS THAT!? THAT'S NOT FAIR!

Oh well, I love this, please end up having a polyamorous relationship between Jaune and his lovely ladies. They deserve love, and so does he.

the pacing so far is... horrible to say the least. but I'll continue reading.

Honestly, all I see is Ruby's heart being broken in this. It's becoming very clear that the age gap physically and mentally is making this a losing battle for Ruby. Not to mention that Pyhraa(probably butchered the name) has already started a relationship with Jaune. I guess it could go bad but with what you prefer I doubt it. It'll only be worse for Ruby sense he's kinda been stringing her along, being completely OK with the kiss, the covers incident, the way he's been with her such as the little date flirt when they were making their way to Beacon. All I see is a broken heart.

DID RUBES JUST POISON ZWEI?!

Dude I need more. Like, seriously. I'm gonna be up tonight thinking about this most likely. I gotta know what happens. Who ends up with Jaune, if this truly is a Lancaster fic, and most importantly, if the trio will remain friends after all is said and done! Keep it up my dude!

This one had me cracking up. I wish someone could animate this entire series for me. Or at least this chapter

I hate to see my boy be the source of all this drama and angst. I absolutely hate love triangles when they involve my favorite people but this story is compelling! I would suggest you look closely at your words though and possibly spell check. I've noticed a few errors here and there but overall it seems pretty well written imo. I can't wait to read the rest of it! I've been reading them ever since I discovered it

Yoooooo you totally threw me for a loop! You have led me into a snafu for sure! I am so loving all of this! I may not enjoy love triangles, especially when all parties are my 3 top favorites of the series but this is so we'll written I just love it!

Yang reads too much fanfiction

Huh. So Jaune is being enhanced with his sword, becoming unable to tire, but his reflexes were pretty much the result of Pyrrha's training, right? It's literally just Jaune with Semblance-like enhancements, which he's yet to gain in the show.

Also, the passage of time in this story is weird. There's a lot of implied interactions and cold shoulders than are actually shown, and while it's a nice change of pace from the usual cliche trash, it does make it harder to follow sometimes, like when Ruby accuses Jaune of ignoring his friends since he started dating. Well, that said, it does contribute to the minimal-ish style of world building that I really like in this story, so it's not really much of a criticism.

Jesus loves you so so so so so so so so much and thinks your all so so so amazing and wants to help you and come into your life and WILL if you ask and repent out loud watch Todd White or Heidi baker on youtube they are funny and amazing JESSE DUPLANTIS too if you do not like them then shut it off and forget about them forever.

Hey aren't you Keter Metatron in RWBY Amino? Cos it's me, Ruby Arc ( Wolf Faunus )

you're a fine writer, but i'm just like, ugh. I thought there would be a lot more ruby jaune, and jaunes just being a lil!# head. I don't watch sitcoms for a reason. anywho you're a decent writer, and the story is interesting. sorry about my other comments, it was just one of those things were I was desperately hoping for it to go a different way. it's your story bruv, you do you.

ugh! I skipped like five chapters and this stuff is still going on! grrrrrrrrrrr#!