World-building ahoy! I'm lovin' it dear. Souske is iffy though...Gou sleeping with him already? I thought her loyalty to her brother would hold out a bit longer...

Horrendously detailed. Love it though. You capture the right sequence of events very well though...the moment when after she was raped she was blankly combing her hair really got me...it was jarring to read of such atrocity and then read them doing a mundane and normal action. Made it so much more real.

Awesome. Intriguing and interesting!

I loved! congratulations on the wonderful dark history.

He was never too picky when mating, since almost everyone craved a piece of him.

oh boy, i do love this line. I like how Rin is bisexual here. And gash, your words, your beautiful words are just too pleasing to the eyes to read. I also love how you described Rin as he was thinking about murder, and the details you put there. And his insanity. (I kind of know how fun it is to get inside this state of mind. hahaha.)

Me encanto el fic! Es de lo mejor que he leído de esta pareja. Me dio pena como terminó, y por supuesto habría preferido que Sousuke no hubiese muerto, pero me gusto igual.
Gracias por esta fantástica historia y espero que escribas más Sou/Gou

OH MY GOD!

Ok I'm officially dead, can't carry my review anymore. Sorry.

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BUT SERIOUSLY! I absolutely didn't see this comming! Are you trying to kill your reader or what? ARG! How can you keep going while killing SOU'! I loved him godamit! Lucky him, being able to live and being murdered and reborn as long as there stories!
Like always your style carried me gently through this bloody night, making me unable to look away as events slowly turn into murder, and then I WAS there, when Rin was carried away, too shocked to realized. I was too shocked too, like : How? How? HOW?
And it was fabulous! I loved ya! This much emotion, despear, and then this normalacy in the epilogue, this creepy normalicy and this : What will the son become?
I wasn't too fond when I see you write an epilogue. People usually totally close their stories when writing and epilogue, and I think it would be so sad with this fantastic end that lead to so many possibilities. I should have know you would never decieve us like this. That single sentence at the end.. Wow. This give you chill! My imagination is running so wild actually! :D

Answer of your post : Don't say anything! Just write and your gonna keep me in an ocean of hapiness :3
Yeah I think I can see why it's such a big challenge, the universe so different from the original plot of free. I dunno what epicness you have in mind, but there plenty in the story already. And the character are so perfect! And I miss desesperatly another shot ( it's like drug, really ) of this one. ;D
Seriously? Your willing to write one of my fantasy? Oh my god :3 Hum... I need to think long and hard about it. I take your email in note, but I won't have internet this weekend so don't expect anything until monday at least.

Thank you for all and long live to you! :D

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Hi again! This was super cute, and it filled the void in my heart. I honestly don't know how to explain it, but this mad me teary eyed _

Thanks for the update! I'm kinda sad with the ending because I was expecting to see the reaction/pov from gou or rin from when they escape the hideout, but definitely still liked the ending. It gave me a sense of closure lol look forward to your next work!

NO! Curse you!I'm seriously crying here. This was really good, but why! Can't wait to see more of your work *sobs*

Really love your writing I don't understand how you don't have more reviews or favorites. Anyways you're awesome keep it up

Please update soon! I really love this story and look forward to the next chapter

I love this chapter but I have a bad feeling about how to end sousuke.I re-read chapter one and I think he will die and that makes me sad. But I'll wait to see what happens and enjoy it while the relationship with Sousuke and Gou, which it is very beautiful.
thanks for update. Waiting the next chapter!

Omg! This is my favourite chapter!love good. So keep up the goodness and update as soon as possible please

AHHHHHHHHH I can't! The anticipation is too much. I just can't wait to read the next chapter! The wait between are long but always worth it in the end. I also love what u did with the chapter titles XD
Sousuke and Gou are just way too cute. I was actually kinda worried that Sou might piss Gou off when he first entered the room, but it turns out they made up (something i wasn't quite sure about after the last chapter). I was drowning in feels by the time I reach the stairs scene. It really pained me at the end to see them being separated after they finally made up. One thing I love the most is how their relationship progress from the backstory to now, because it isn't abrupt or rushed (unlike most stories). Anyways I'm very looking forward to see the next chapter (no rushing, though, mate)