Good story.

I already love it even after reading the first chapter! I can already tell that you are a very talented writer. I'm very excited to read more! :)

I'm super impressed. I love how you don't change the main storyline, while still making Olive a HUGE part of it. Olive is an awesome character. Also, I love how you captured the arrogance of Ciel. He wasn't my favourite character from the series (that spot goes to Finney) but the way you wrote him was very interesting and quite appropriate from the plot. I don't know how you'll manage to control Olive when Ciel dies (if you stay with the original plot from the anime). Good Luck!

Hello~ Might I ask when the next chapter will be? You haven't uploaded in a bit and I do really like the story.

I think this is one of the best fanfics I have ever read! Not only does it put the characters as you would imagine them, but it also puts in a scene from the actual anime that you can recognize rather than making one up. Although that is a good thing about it, you could've made a whole new scene, so that it would have been something new to imagine. Another thing you need to work on is your spelling. (There were SO many typos.) Otherwise it's a fantastic story!

Olive sounded so cool when she said that one line about never allowing Ciel to strike a woman.

OMG! I LOVE! This chapter! This Chapter and the last chapter were my fav! Finally Ciel and Oliver/ Olive and getting somewhere! Please update soon!

I like it. It's not bad, keep writing please!

Pretty good story so far. So is she eventually going to find out about Sebastian being a demon? Is Ciel an Sebastian going to find out about her companions? I look forward to your next chapter and how things will turn out.

I need more! Please!

this was awesome! please write more. I love Olive (r) as a character!