| Reviews for Guardian of the Sun |
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   LordofTerror chapter 10 . 8/27/2019 when oh when shall we get a new chapter for this story? it's been so long |
| SomeAussieBloke chapter 10 . 7/29/2018 God damn it my dude I’ve been hooked with everything you’ve written then I get to this one and it’s like every other one has been a little fish hook and this has been a hook the size of an anchor I need you to update this real soon it’s just to good to be left at the side of the street only a few blocks from away from where it started. All in all I’ve enjoyed the crap out of this man don’t just leave it hanging on a shelf pick it up blow the dust off and keep on going. |
| heckelman88 chapter 10 . 7/17/2018 Hope in the end Naruto, Benihime and Karasu resolve their respective issues and Karasu ends up with Naruto as well, it's like she said she's been friends with him since they were kids and she clearly cares for him on a deeper level now. You write extremely good characters, have you ever consider doing a Naruto and Tenten or Naruto and Tayuya or a Naruto and Harem pairing? |
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/12/2018 This is awesome! Plz continue! |
| LordofTerror chapter 10 . 6/8/2018 god damn this is the 3rd story that I've read that us well written and captivating only for it to be dropped I really hope you actually come back to this and two others if not once I get my laptop fixed I'd love to adopt or contiune them for you. |
| DesertBrat chapter 10 . 6/6/2018 Are you abandoning this? |
| ItNandoFTW chapter 10 . 1/8/2018 Where are you? Come back it a great story and update this story please |
| Rebmul chapter 10 . 12/30/2017 I kinda hope they can save their friendship |
| Archangel Uzumaki chapter 10 . 10/12/2017 Please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please updat please update please update please update please update |
| laughingfox31 chapter 10 . 9/1/2017 Update please |
| calhounariel97 chapter 8 . 8/11/2017 She's just jealous of their relationship. |
| calhounariel97 chapter 9 . 8/11/2017 Hmmm i was wondering when blow jobs would come up in their relationship. I think she should give him one. |
| calhounariel97 chapter 10 . 8/11/2017 Update this right now! Best oc story I've ever read |
| AlexandrTheDrunK chapter 9 . 7/25/2017 Long time , no chapter! |
| Dreams0fCalamity chapter 10 . 1/31/2017 It's a nice fic so far and I look forward to seeing more of it. However, the relationship between Naruto and Benihime is way too hasty. It makes sense from a sexual standpoint but that's about it. Plus, Naruto's reaction to Karasu badmouthing Benihime is over the top. Especially considering how Naruto should be closer to Karasu, at least enough to give her the benefit of the doubt. That said, I wanna see where you take this. |
