I just stumbled upon this story and all i can say is wow! This is honestly one hell of a story and i am absolutely in love with it. There was so much feelings involved that i got so emotional with everything. From annas father passing away to poor kristoff to elsa and anna losing years of being happy together. Kristoff was a great guy and even though he was the one that got hurt the most in the end he was willing to start over and forgiven them, so sweet. Elsa and anna ugh their relationship i wish they would have spoken sooner about their feelings but i understand why they didn't. Im just so happy with the ending, they truly belong together. Thank you so much for this story you're an amazing writer.

Quite enjoyable, keep up the hard work

I just spent all night and day reading this story. Thank you so much for it :) really liked your narration style. Kudos!

Really liked how you wrapped it up. A good story that didnt feel too short or drawn-out. Good luck to you as a writer and hope to see more from you :)

Hm. I found this a bit difficult to believe. Why would they stay apart for so long? Even more, why be unfaithful? This chapter too had too much of her brother, as did most of the story :/ I thought that the previous chapter would redeem the story (and you know I liked it very much) but this still dragged him back in.

The ending was nice, I just wish this all had more of them. Thank you for the story, still; I am not entirely happy, but it has its beautiful moments (though so many trying ones...)

Thank you for such a beautiful story. I read your story for 3 or 4 times...and the waves of emotions are still the same. honestly I dont agree with Anna for many things she's done. But she's lucky Elsa's still there all the with her arms wide open, waiting for her, even when she made everybody go through shit.
Your writting is amazing, make me cry, make me jump for happiness. I hope you could spend time to write more, another story may be :D
Best wishes for you :

Ya know, it is really, really easy to despise Anna hurt a lot of people here, and everything still ended up peachy. It just annoyed me. That's not to shoot down the content, it was very good. While the character of Anna annoyed me, and I felt she really should have ended up with much worse over the crap she dragged everybody else through, it was just an example of the emotion you brought into your writing style. Really lovely. Thank you for sharing.

Alright, so I came across your fanfic when the last chapter was update and honestly, I'm so happy I did. I absolutely love your story and how well you managed to portray all the characters' emotions. I especially love how you've written Anna, how she handles everything, all her thoughts and how she feels about... well, everything. I do think you could have focused a bit on developing Elsa and Anna's relationship in the beginning, when the were kids and all that though. You took me through a journey, honestly. Well, more like an emotional rollercoaster. Definitely a fresh breath of air from the cliches. Even though we've seen a glimpse of their future in the prologue, I couldn't wait to see what happens next. Again, I adore how you've written the characters and Elsa and Anna's relationship. Your writing definitely made me feel strongly and had me emotionally invested in your work so for that, I thank you. Thank you for writing this wonderful (cough heart wrenching cough) piece. I can't wait to check out the rest of your work :)
(sorry for any typos, I'm in typing this on my potato I call a phone XD)

I love how this story killed me lots of times. Anna's emotions were so beautifully portrayed, and I just love how realistic it was. I can't say I agree with what she did all those years, most especially using Kristoff who genuinely loved her, but I do understand what drove her to do it. Her decision to fulfill her father's last wish nearly made me cry.

I just maybe think that it would've been easier if she tried loving someone who wasn't related to Elsa. I know she didn't know that Elsa felt the same, but choosing her brother to move on was a little... I don't know. I mean, like it or not, he would at least remind her of Elsa because they're siblings... which actually DID happen. Her actions and decisions were like a recipe for disaster, which resulted to their tragic lives. Kristoff didn't deserve it, and I love how you didn't just let him be completely fine with everything - because lots of fanfic have him okay with being used or replaced so easily.

Though it might sound like I was complaining over the route you chose, I really am not. Your story just showed how flawed people can be, and I wouldn't have it any other way. This was painful to read, but I don't really mind angst/drama. So kudos to you! Great job! ;)

Ok this story is amazing! You are such an amazing writer :) please update this! I love it!

I think its good that Kristoff found out literally the morning after Ana's infidelity. It saves the story from falling into the cliche of two people struggling to hide their affair from others. With that being said, I'm curious how the rest of the family will take it.

Considering the history of that dress that Ana wore for her wedding, I want to believe that at least one of the parents may have noticed something between Elsa and Ana early on but chose not to get involved or simply chose to ignore the truth.

But that's just one way to go about it.

I'm curious what you'll cook up fox, believe me when I say I'll be reading!

Well, can't say he isn't right. So is Anna though.

Glad to see an update! Now, I'm usually all Elsanna, but seriously, fuck Elsa and Anna. Poor Kristoff :(...

I hope he finds his peace somewhere and does stay away from these two. They're no good to be in his life

i had to read this again. i just had to. god damn, i love ur story so much

Well cheating is never good and I hate to see kristoff being like that. But that being said... Yes! Finally! Yay elsanna. Elsa is finally not running away from Anna. I was worried she would run away in fear of hurting her brother. I'm glad you're back.