May I just say this story is amazing! I loved how this story was all your own. Thanks so much for writing it!

I like the part where you wrote near the end of how Zars qi was like sex to Fang. Ca you maybe put in more seducing scenes between Zar and Fang

I love the part where you wrote about the Arendelle's Royal Union and how a foyal prince or princess can only hafe sexual content with there their future wife or husband.

I love the part where you wrote the part about Zar and Fang had sex

Love it! Are you making a sequel?! :D

U should do a sequel

This was a very good story.

Now that was a wonderful story! Thank you...THANK YOU for a wonderful adventure!

Wow that was cute & hilarious. Ben I understand your overprotective however your father is right. Albert is your boy & your father (beast) grandson he will be fine.
Hope to have a sequel for this. Be honest a slow ending to AMAZING STORY!
Zar/Fang daughter having ice powers & stamina to boot sweet little girl.

Well, a fitting ending with a fitting beginning.

Oh so sweet! Ben and Mal are engaged with a baby on the way, and Zar and Fang are getting married! Can't wait to finish it off with what the future holds!

Lol oh Ben xD

Hope the wedding night be spicy. *giggles*

Aww I'm having mixed emotions. I don't want this to be "The End". Maybe you can make a sequel of the story.
Finally Ben is told, took Mal long enough. (Giggles)
Zar/Fang wow Elsa already planned the wedding. That was fast & sweet.
Hope Fang has Mal as her maid of honor, & Zar has Ben as his Best Man.
I mean without Ben/Mal assistance Zar/Fang wouldn't have happened.

Way to go Zar & Fang, if the "time freeze" didn't effect Elsa just her servants & subjects then she must know or felt what happened.
Zar that display would make your mother so proud. Now that's a way "Let It Go" moment.
That horrible crisis is averted next would explaining what happened after time froze and Queen-to-be Mal telling her King Ben he is going to be a daddy.