Wow that was quite a story

that was boring

aww so sad and so sweet

I read the prequel. Short but good

Interesting (although, obviously, sad) idea!

I saw elsewhere that English isn’t your first language, and I think it’s awesome and brave that you’re writing in it anyway. Something to look out for when you’re editing, though, would be making sure each sentence starts with a capital letter and end with a full stop. It might also be a good idea to try to find a beta to help tidy up some of the grammatical mistakes, especially if they can explain the reasons behind their suggestions.

Became to lazy to find errors this time. Are you going to continue this story? How old are they in it? I think you should continue with the story...

OMG